Petite redaction sur : L'homme et la nature ... Qui gagne ?

Je pense pouvoir t'aider car j'habite depuis 3 ans aux US a NY.
Cependant je ne comprends pas ton sujet.. mais j'ai une petite idée donc la voici...

In our days the humans are slowly destroying our planet and if this continues we will no longer be here in a couple on centuries. These modifications that our planet is victim is due to numerous polution and deforestation. Also, the fact that people do not pay attention do their consummation of electricity, water or other vival products, is a major problem for our society.
I would say that most of the natures problem is due to the human activity. We can conclude that humans are taking control over the nature.


Voila c'est un peu cour mais bon... j'espère que sa t'aidera

Thank you , thank for helpy , merci tu m'a "inspirer" pour une dsuite ou un rallongement merci beaucoup

Certes on t'a apporté qqes idées mais il y a beaucoup de fautes.