Raconter c'est vancances en anglais

Sujet du devoir

Bonjours, le sujet de mon devoir et de raconter mes vacances en anglais en dix phrase. Pourriez vous m'aidez a me corriger car j'ai des difficultés en anglais. Merci :)

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

For two week i visited my grandparents  in Portugal.

Every time I go there, I went out wih my little brother where going I fetch eggs ( chercher des œufs ). It's funny because my brother is aifraid of the chicken.

When I retourned in Paris, it was too cold.

I'm climbed the Eiffel Tower with my mother and my little brother and wee could see all Paris, it was fabulous and magic !

When I went home, I went to cinema whit my friends, we looked " Paranormal activity 2 "

 I liked it because it was very terrifed.

Seventeen in  Fabruary, I went to Savoi for a week to see my uncle and my cousins, skied with them, its terrific.

In August I went we have tanned on the beach and at the pool.

Finally I have visited the museum it's great.