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Sujet du devoir

Think of a place that represents love, a warm welcome, happiness, freedom and fun to you. Describe this place, say where and what it is, what you enjoy doing there and when you can go there. You can describe some of the moments you have spent there too.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

My favorite place is my bedroom.I live in Nice.my mom chose this place to I feel good and comfortable to create my own world.My bedroom is such big,it's a big room with a middle window,who give on my garden with many plants.My room is yellow andblue.One side light blue and the other side dark blue.I have a mezzanine,two big wardrobe,a bookcase and a corner with my pillows and my armchair to relax me.I have some paintings like Audrey Hepburn and family's pictures.It is a warm place.My room is always tidy and clear because,because I don't like live on mesy.My bedroom is full, too much full,I think.She brings hapiness everyday when I wake up and sleep.I feel protect. I can create some adventures,I can cry smile,laught alone or with my friends or my family .It's a room but I feel free.But I hang out too.In my bedroom,I've already danced,sung,read...I remember,when I was 6 years old,We took pillows and with my best friend we did a battle of bolster and I did so much in this place with my friends.I think if I move away to a new house,I 'll feel bad to leave this room,with is souvenirs.This place,with is stuff inside grew up with me and I can't believe to leave it.