Svp corrigés mes fautes

Publié le 12 mars 2011 il y a 13A par Anonyme - Fin › 15 mars 2011 dans 13A
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Sujet du devoir

Bonjour, j'ai un exposé oral en anglais lundi. Pour sa j'ai essayé de faire sa écrit. J'ai juste besoin de votre aide pour repérer mes fautes et me corrigé. N'hésitez à changé les tournures de phrase voir en rajouté.

Merci beaucoup!

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Wales is a quite small contry who's situated in west of England. 4 millions peoples live in Wales. The capital city is Cardiff. The weater is quiet cold in winter and not to hot in summer. A lot of people are miners and farmers. The two highest mountain are Brecon Beacons who's tall 886 meters and Snowdon who's tall 1085 meters. The queen Elisabeth is the head of state. The leek and the daffodil are symbols in Wales. Wales national sport is rugby. It is originated in England at Rugby School in 1823. Until the 1960's the players were mostly coal miners and steel workers. Teams who's participate in six nations tournament is Italy,France, Scotland, Ireland, England and Wales. They play on a pitch.



8 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 12 mars 2011
Wales is a quite small contry WHICH's (car ce n'est pas une personne) situated in THE west of England. 4 millions PEOPLE (pas de "S" car people est déjà au pluriel) live THERE (ça évite la répétition). The capital city is Cardiff. The weater is quiet cold in winter and not to hot in summer. MOST OF THE PEOPLE (j'aurais mis ça) are miners and farmers. The two highest MOUTAINS (il y en a deux non?) are Brecon Beacons WHICH's 886 meters and Snowdon WHICH's 1085 meters. The queen Elisabeth is the head of THE state. The leek and the daffodil are THE symbols OF Wales. Wales' national sport is rugby. It is originated in England at Rugby School in 1823. Until the 1960's the players were mostly coal miners and steel workers. Teams WHICH's participate in six nations tournament ARE Italy,France, Scotland, Ireland, England and Wales. They play on a pitch.

Voilà. Je ne suis pas sûr pour tout. Je t'ai mis en Majuscules les corrections, parfois je t'ai mis entre parenthèses pourquoi. :)
Anonyme
Posté le 12 mars 2011
Super merci beaucoup :D
Anonyme
Posté le 12 mars 2011
J'ai fais la suite de l'exposé si sa te dérange pas de m'aider encore une fois ^^

Dacid Lloyd is rugbyman. He is welsh and he plays in Llandaff Rugby Club. He is 15. He lives with his father and his step mother in the outskirts of Cardiff. His parents are both physiotherapist. Since few years ago he is allergic to penicillin. DAvid likes Roald Dahl and his stories.

Roald Dahl was born in 1916 in Wales. His parents were Norway. He has 5 brothers and sisters. His father died in 1920. His first job is Sheil Oil Company. He was marries in 1953 with actress and they had 5 children. He wrote lots of children's stories, there are Danny the champion of the world in 1975 and Charlie and the chocolate factory in 1964. Charlie is a boy and his family is very poor. If he found a golden ticket he can go to the chocolate factory. The director of the factory is Willy Wonka.

Anonyme
Posté le 12 mars 2011
personne ?
Anonyme
Posté le 12 mars 2011
Wales is quite a small country situated in the west of England. 4 million people live there. Many people are farmers. highest mountainS are...
It comes from England at Rugby School in 1823 (j'ai pas trop compris ta phrase mais si tu voulais dire "ça vient de .." c'est comme ça).
Teams participating in the 6 nations tournament are Italy, France...
Anonyme
Posté le 12 mars 2011
Dacid Lloyd is rugbyman. He is welsh and he plays in Llandaff Rugby Club. He is 15. He lives with his father and his step mother in the outskirts of Cardiff. His parents are both physiotherapist. Since few years ago, he is allergic to penicillin. DAvid likes Roald Dahl and his stories.

Roald Dahl was born in 1916 in Wales. His parents were Norway. He has 5 brothers and sisters. His father died in 1920. His first job WAS Sheil Oil Company. He was MARRIED in 1953 with AN actress and they had 5 children. He wrote A lots of children's stories, SUCH AS "Danny the champion of the world" which was written in 1975 and "Charlie and the chocolate factory" which was written in 1964. Charlie is a boy and his family is very poor. If he found (si il trouvait?) a golden ticket he COULD go to the chocolate factory WHOSE director is Willy Wonka.

Je pense que c'est ça. Ce que je t'ai mis en guillemets sont bien les titres des histoires?
Anonyme
Posté le 13 mars 2011
oui. merci beaucoup
Anonyme
Posté le 13 mars 2011
merci !

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