URGENTTTTTTT

il n'y a pas de faute !!!!!

Tu as seulement fait 2 fautes 

1ere ligne pas who is mais who are et derniere ligne outdor non mais outdoor avec deux o

I am looking for boys who are really sincere, touching and sporty.

I want a boy who's handsome.

(je ne comprend pas le sens de cette phrase!) I want him to be loyal??

I need a boy who can help me and can spend lots of time with me.

He must be friendly, humoristic, polite, patient and cheerful.

(cette phrase est mal placée dans le context!) I love outdoor activities during the Summer.

Merci beaucoup mais c'est who's ou who are

Ca ne veut rien dire "he's looking for loyal":

En français c'est il recherche du loyal...

Et aussi c'est "who are", pasque c'est au pluriel...

Je t'en pris! J'espère que t'auras une bonne note! :)

I am looking for boys who are really sincere, touchable and who like praticing sport

I want a handsome boy, a loyal boy

I need a boy who can help me and spend time with me

he must be friendly, have good sense, have humour, be polite, patient and cheerful.

I would want him to like outdoor activities during summer, as I do.

JE SUIS BILINGUE DONC CA DOIT ALLER

Je suis Anglophone donc c'est bon

I am looking for boys who's really into sincere, touchable, sportive. 
I want a boy who's handsome.
Im looking for a loyal boy.
I need a boy who can help me and to spend a lot of time with me.
He must be friendly, good sense of humor, polite,patience, cheerful
And i love outdoor activities like during the summer