writing about your charachter's future

Publié le 26 mai 2011 il y a 12A par Anonyme - Fin › 2 juin 2011 dans 12A
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Sujet du devoir

je dois écrire un texte sur le futurde mon personnage, ses ambitions et un reve fou ou irréakliste est-ce que vous pouvez le corriger? svp? merci d'avance

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Bladana does not want to have only one job but at least two or three ones.
She wants to be a languages teacher at university with original methods, for example she would be on the stage with her pupils to improve their French and their memory. She would like to work either in New-York or in London but not on her planet.
Otherwise she would become a famous rider because she loves horses and goes horse-riding twice a week since she is twelve years old. She has won the most of competitions with her horse and that is why she wants to be a rider ,to can be always with him and can go horse-riding every day.



3 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 26 mai 2011
Tu as utilisé un traducteur ?
Anonyme
Posté le 26 mai 2011
she has been horse-riding twice a week since she was 12 years old

she has won a lot of competitions ...

..she wants to be a rider in order to* be able to always be with him and go .../ she wants to be a rider so** she can always be with him and go .........

*in order to= afin de

** so= de telle manière que
to be able = pouvoir , être capable de
Anonyme
Posté le 26 mai 2011
Bladana does not want to have only one job but at least two or three ones.
She wants to be a language teacher at the university with original methods, for example she would be on stage with her pupils in order to improve their French and their memory. She would like to work either in New-York or in London but not on her planet.
Otherwise she would like to become a famous rider because she loves horses and she has been riding horse twice a week since she was twelve years old. She has won several competitions with her horse and that is why she wants to be a rider ,to always be able to be with her horse and also be able to be horse-riding every day.

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