Corriger les fautes de mon texte en anglais.

Publié le 3 janv. 2013 il y a 11A par Anonyme - Fin › 7 janv. 2013 dans 11A
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Sujet du devoir

Bonjour,

La consigne est de raconter ses vacances de Noël au passé. (Minimum 1 page)

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Voici ce que j'ai fais:

A few days before Christmas, me and my sisters had decorated the fir.
I spent Christmas with my parents, my uncles and my aunts.
The December 24, the day of Christmas Eve, I organized with my family a festive meal.
Input, we ate oysters, shrimp, salmon. The dish consisted of a turkey, potatoes and salad. For dessert, we tasted ice cream with vanilla and chocolate.
The December 25, at midnight I was spoiled by gifts: a telephone, jewels, and of clothing .I was very happy and amazed. I went to bed very late that day.
A few days later, on December 31, before the night of New Year's Eve, my family and me organisions once again a meal of holiday.
In the twelve blows of midnight, the New Year began .
We drank champagne, and we wanted to "HAPPY NEW YEAR".
Outside, at about three o'clock they heard of people shouting the New Year.

La traduction:

Quelques jours avant Noël, mes sœurs et moi décorions le sapin.
Je passais Noël avec mes parents, mes oncles et mes tantes.
Le 24 Décembre, le jour du réveillon de Noël, j'organisais avec ma famille un repas de fête.
En entrée, on mangeait des huîtres, crevettes, saumon. Le plat se composait d'une dinde, pommes de terre et salade. Pour le dessert, nous goûtions la crème glacée à la vanille et au chocolat.
Le 25 Décembre à minuit j'ai été gâté par des cadeaux:. D'un téléphone, de bijoux, de vêtements et j'ai été très heureuse et surprise. Je me suis couché très tard ce jour-là.
Quelques jours plus tard, le 31 Décembre, avant la nuit de la Saint-Sylvestre, ma famille et moi organisions une fois de plus un repas de fête.
Au cours des douze coups de minuit, la nouvelle année commençait.
Nous buvions du champagne, et nous sous souhaitions "BONNE ANNÉE".
A l'extérieur, vers trois heures du matin, on entendait des gens crier la nouvelle année.

(Pouvez-vous me corriger mes fautes d'orthographe en anglais svp?
Bonne année




10 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 3 janv. 2013
A few days before Christmas, me and my sisters had decorated the christmas' fir.
I spent Christmas with my parents, my uncles and my aunts.( OU I spent Christmas with my family.)
The day of Christmas Eve, I organized with my family a festive meal.
Input, we ate oysters, shrimp, salmon. The dish consisted of a turkey, some potatoes and salad. For dessert, we ate vanilla and chocolate ice cream.
The December 25, at midnight I was spoiled by gifts: a telephone, jewels, and clothes .I was very happy and amazed. I went to bed very late.
A few days later, on December 31, before the night of New Year's Eve, my family and me organized once again a meal.
At midnight, the New Year began .
We drank champagne, and everyone wished "HAPPY NEW YEAR".
Outside, at three o'clock we heard people who wished the New Year.
Anonyme
Posté le 3 janv. 2013
Merci verybadwoman! Bonne annee!
Anonyme
Posté le 3 janv. 2013
pour dire sapin de moel je serai plus avec christmas tree
Anonyme
Posté le 3 janv. 2013
noel*
Anonyme
Posté le 3 janv. 2013
Et voici ma traduction :)

Few days before Christmas, my sisters and I had decorated the Christmas tree.
On the 24th of December, on the X-Mas eve, my parents helped me to prepare a festive meal. For the first course, we ate oysters, shrimps and smoked salmon. The main course was composed with a roasted turkey added with potatoes and salad.
As for the dessert, we tasted some vanilla and chocolate flouvered ice-cream.
When it was midnight on the 25th of December, I was pampered with gifts such as a mobile phone and some clothes. I was really surprised and so happy as you can guess. I went to bed very late.
Few days later, on the 31st of December, this time it was the New Year's Eve's celebrations. Another festive meal was to be prepared and so we did. When the clocks started to ring at midnight the New Year was welcome. We drank some champagne and wished each other a Happy New Year.
Outside, in the streets, it was around 3 am and we could hear some people shouting loudly Happy New Year!

Bonne année!
Anonyme
Posté le 4 janv. 2013
Je te remercie! Bne annee
Anonyme
Posté le 4 janv. 2013
Merci et bne annee
Anonyme
Posté le 4 janv. 2013
A few days before Christmas, my sisters and I had decorated the christmas tree.
I spent Christmas with my parents, uncles and aunts (ou with my family).
On the 24 December, Christmas Eve, I organized a festive meal with my family.
We had oysters, shrimp and salmon for the starter. The dish consisted of turkey, potatoes and salad. For dessert, we ate ice cream with vanilla and chocolate.
At midnight, on the 25th, I was spoilt with gifts: a mobile phone, jewels, and clothes .I was very happy and amazed. That day I went to bed very early.
A few days later, on 31 December, my family and I organised holiday meal, once again.
On the twelve blows of midnight, the new year began .
We drank champagne and wished each other a happy new year.
At about three o'clock, we heard some people outside, who were shouting "Happy New Year!!!"
Anonyme
Posté le 4 janv. 2013
merci! bonne année!
Anonyme
Posté le 4 janv. 2013
de rien!!
bonne année à toi aussi!!

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