Devoir maison

Publié le 19 avr. 2010 il y a 14A par Anonyme - Fin › 3 mai 2010 dans 14A
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Sujet du devoir

Sur une copie, raconter vos vacances au passé SANS TRADUCTEUR...

J'aimerait dire : ( bien sur j'invente )
Pendant mes vacances je suis allé au parc d'attraction, d'où je me suis bien amusai.
Après, j'ai été dehors dans mon quartier pour voir mes amis.
J'ai été voir ma famille.
Pendant ces vacances j'ai été beaucoup plus souvent dehors que chez moi ! Car il avait fait très beau et chaud dehors !
Je n'avait pas vu mes vacances passée, elles sont passée très vite ! Vivement mes prochaines vacances !

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

J'aimerais de l'aide de votre part pour m'aider a traduire mais svp pas de traducteur...
Je suis en 4° !
MErci



13 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 19 avr. 2010
Je vais te donner une petite aide , vu que les vacances que tu vas raconté sont dejà terminés et bien tu dois utilisé le prétérit ( pour le former tu reajoute ED a un verbe regulier , si il n'est pas regulier regarde la liste des verbes irregulier ) maintenant tu peux commencé et si tu as besoin d'aide je suis là :) bonne chance
Anonyme
Posté le 19 avr. 2010
Donc le début serait :
During my vacation I went to the amusement park, where I am amused.
??
Anonyme
Posté le 19 avr. 2010
During my holidays, I've gone to an amusement park, where I had fun time.
Then, I've gone in my district to see my friends.
I've seen my family.
During this holidays, I have been more out than in my home, because the weather was hot and sunny.
I haven't seen the time spend,
I wait impatiently my future holidays.
Anonyme
Posté le 19 avr. 2010
During my hollidays, went in an attraction parc where I enjoyed.
After, I went in my street to see my friends.
I went see my family.
During this hollidays, i was much more often outside than to me, because it was very hot outside.
I didn't see my past hollidays, they was past very quickly !
Deeply my next hollidays !

Voila, j'èspère que je t'ai aidé !
bellacullen.
Anonyme
Posté le 19 avr. 2010
merci
Anonyme
Posté le 20 avr. 2010
aurait tu d'autre idée ? de chose a mettre en + car sa fait court ! c a inventer ! =)
Anonyme
Posté le 20 avr. 2010
Bonjour,

(il dois surement y avoir des fautes verifie quand meme)

During my holidays, I went to attration park, where i very amused.
After, i went outside in my neighborhood for see my friends. I saw my family.
During that holidays, i went more often ouside than in my house.
Because it was very sunny and very warm ouside.
I didn't see my holidays passed, there passed too speed.
Deeply my after holidays !
Anonyme
Posté le 24 avr. 2010
Bonjour,

During my holydays I went to an amusement park where I had a lot of fun (ou I enjoyed myself).
After, I visited my friends in the neighbourhoud.(voisin:neighbour; neighbourhoud:voisinage)
I visited all my family.
During these holydays, I was more often outside than at home!
That's because it was sunny and warm outside.
I didn't see my holydays go by (passer), they went too quickly!
I can't wait for the next ones!

=> phrases au prétérit, sans traducteur, pas d'erreur de grammaire.
Anonyme
Posté le 27 avr. 2010
During the holidays I went to an amusement park where I had a lot of fun!
After, I visited my friends in the neighbourhoud., and I also visited all my family.
During these holydays, I was more often outside than inside at home!
That's because it was sunny and warm outside.
I didn't see my holidays pass, they went too quickly!
I can't wait for the next ones!

voili voilou! :)
Anonyme
Posté le 27 avr. 2010
Je te propose :

" During my holidays, I went to the park, where I had fun.
Then, I went outside to see my friends.
I have seen my family.
During that holidays, I was more outside than inside because it was very sunny and very hot outside !
My holidays passed very speedly, I hope the next holidays come quickly ! "
Anonyme
Posté le 28 avr. 2010
Bonjour, voici une traduction que je te propose:

During my holiday, I went to an attration park where I had a good time. Then, I went outside to see my frinds. I went to my family. During my holiday, I was more outside than at home, because it was very hot and the sky was so blue. I didn't see my holiday past. Deeply my next holiday!!! Voilà, je suis également en 4ème et avec les mots que nous savons et bien je pense que c'est une bonne traduction sans traducteur.
Anonyme
Posté le 28 avr. 2010
* friends
Anonyme
Posté le 1 mai 2010
Voila ce que je te conseille :)
During my holidays I went to the amusement park, where from I am good amused.
Later, I was outside in my district to see my friends.
I was to see my family.
During these holidays I was much more often outside than to me! Because he(it) had made the very beautiful and warm outside!
I had not seen my holidays spent, they are very fast spent! Deeply my next holidays .....
Bonne chance :)

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