Devoirs d'anglais faire une fausse lettre de motivation en anglais

Publié le 29 oct. 2010 il y a 13A par Anonyme - Fin › 2 nov. 2010 dans 13A
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Sujet du devoir

faire une fausse lettre de motivation en anglais sur le mannequin en indiquant:
L'age
L'école ou on étudie
Les hobbies
Pourquoi avoir choisie se metier
Les horaires de libres

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

I'm wrinting to apply for the job of the modelling for Vogue who you advertised recently in the newspaper.
I'm 17years old and a student at Rochambeau High.
I'm interested in this job because i love fashion and photograph.
I would really love to learn more about fashion.
I like to be taken in photograph and to march I think i would be great for the job.
Thank you for very your attention



3 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 30 oct. 2010
I just saw your annonce for a free place as model. I am 17 years old, and i am studying at Rochambeau High School.

During my childhood, we and my friends liked to take each others in picture and playing as a true model, we liked to walk and to wear some interesting clothes.

Anonyme
Posté le 30 oct. 2010
Je te proposerais quelques ajustements sur la fin de ton texte :
"
I like to be photographed and paraded.
I think I would be perfect for this job.
Thank you for your attention
"
Anonyme
Posté le 30 oct. 2010
Bonjour Maalak,

Là je le texte de DAVIDLORD est corrigé:

"I just saw your advertisement for a free place as a model. I am 17 years old, and I study at Rochambeau High School.

During my childhood, my friends and I liked to take each other in pictures and act like true models, we liked to walk and wear some interesting fashion clothes. I like to be photographed and paraded.
I think I would be a perfect match for this job.
Thank you for your attention,
Maalak. "

Cordialement,

Benjamin CNED 3ème

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