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-Welcome to our restaurant ! Did you call to reserve a table, sir ?-Of course, I did !
-Could I have your name, sir ?
-DUBOIS.
-Oh ! You're French, aren't you ?
-Sure !
-Where do you come from ?
-Paris !
-Paris ? Oh ! I've hover been there but I hope one day to visit this lovely city ! Would you like to sit there ?
-Er...not really ! Could I sit at the black, please ? It's quiter !
-Naturally, sir. Here's the menu. Would you like something to drink ? a glasse of wine, for example ?
-No, thanks. I have to drink to work ! But could I have a battle of mineral water ?
-Of course. Will you have sparkling* or plain* water ?
-Plain water, please.
-Here you are, sir. Are you ready to order ?
-What would you recommend ?
-May I suggest our delicious smobed salmen to start with ?
-It sounds* great !
-What will you have for the main couse ?
-I think I'll have the turkey with fried patatos.
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Bonjour Mamadu786,
Voici le texte corrigé:
"-Welcome to our restaurant! Did you call to reserve a table, sir?
-Of course, I did!
-Could I have your name please?
-DUBOIS.
-Oh! You're French, aren't you?
-Sure!
-Where do you come from?
-Paris!
-Paris?! Oh! I've never been there but I hope one day to visit this lovely city, and country! Would you like to sit there?
-Er... not really! Could I sit at the black, please? It's quieter!
-No problem, sir. Here's the menu. Would you like something to drink ? a glass of wine, for example?
-No, thanks. But may I please have a bottle of water?
-Of course. Will you have sparkling or flat water?
-Flat water, please.
-Here you are, sir. Are you ready to order?
-What would you recommend?
-May I suggest our delicious smoked salmon for the entrée?
-It sounds great!
-What will you have for the main course?
-I think I'll have the turkey with fried potatoes."
Cordialement,
Benjamin CNED 3ème
Voici le texte corrigé:
"-Welcome to our restaurant! Did you call to reserve a table, sir?
-Of course, I did!
-Could I have your name please?
-DUBOIS.
-Oh! You're French, aren't you?
-Sure!
-Where do you come from?
-Paris!
-Paris?! Oh! I've never been there but I hope one day to visit this lovely city, and country! Would you like to sit there?
-Er... not really! Could I sit at the black, please? It's quieter!
-No problem, sir. Here's the menu. Would you like something to drink ? a glass of wine, for example?
-No, thanks. But may I please have a bottle of water?
-Of course. Will you have sparkling or flat water?
-Flat water, please.
-Here you are, sir. Are you ready to order?
-What would you recommend?
-May I suggest our delicious smoked salmon for the entrée?
-It sounds great!
-What will you have for the main course?
-I think I'll have the turkey with fried potatoes."
Cordialement,
Benjamin CNED 3ème
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Ton texte est bien, il faut juste changer quelques petits détails ou rajouter d'autres choses! Pourquoi désir tu de l'aide, qu'elle est ta question, tu as oublié de la mentionner ?
Juste un petit détail, au début du texte, tu fais des réponses courtes comme par exemple :
- sure !
-Paris !
-etc..
Essais de faire plutôt une phrase, avec plus d'adjectifs et qui donne un ou plusieurs renseignements afin de faire un dialogue plus vivant !
Il faudrait que tu trouves une petite péripétie, comme parce exemple, la viande est trop salée etc..
Pense à faire une conclusion, en demandant l'addition puis voir les invités partir.
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