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Bonjour, Jai un exposé sur la ségrégation raciale et j'aimerais que vous me donniez votre avis et que vous me corrigiez ou me dites si je peux rajouter quelques choses. Merci d'avance
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The racial segregation
The racial segregation is a following of the American civil war. The racial segregation lasts 92 years. It’s a dark period of the history of the Unites States.
During it the black people was put aside the society. They couldn’t get married with white people. The children didn’t go to the same school that the white people. They were obliged to sit down of the back of the bus. They didn’t drink at the same water dispenser, they have to go in restaurant do for them, go to the beach for “colored persons” This was a law named Jim Crow.
The December 1st of 1955 Rosa Parks a black American woman sits on the places reserved to the white people in the bus. To have made it she was judged and had a fine of 15 dollars. She was born on February 4th on 1913 and dead October 24th of 2005. Following it Martin Luther decided to do a boycott of the bus of Montgomery. The boycott was pacific. During three thousand and eighty one day any black person took the bus. Following it the constitution decides of delete the Jim Crow’s Law but they keep being applied. So Martin Luther King does a lot of speech about it. He was supported by John F. Kennedy. He said her famous speech the 15th January of 1929 “I have a dream” in front of the Lincoln memorial during the walking for the work and freedom. Where he shows his desire and his hope of a brotherly and without distinction United States. He was assassin the same day of the walking for the black freedom by a ball in the jaw. It was a white people who wanted keep the segregation.
There was too Malcolm X it was a preacher Muslim and afro-American. He is known for defending the black people during the racial segregation.
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Salut ! Je peux te corriger quelques trucs :
Racial Segregation is a result of the American Civil War. Racial Segregation lasts 92 years. It is a dark period of United States history. During this period, black people were put aside society. They couldn't get married with white people. Black children didn't go to same schoolsthanwhitechildren. Black people were obliged to sit down in the back of the bus. They didn't go to the same cafés, they had to go to a restaurant, specially built for them, they had to go to beaches for "colored people". This came from a law called "Jim Crow".
December, (the) 1st (of) 1955, Rosa Parks, a black American woman, sat down on one of the reserved places to white people, in the bus. For that act, she was judged and had to pay a fine of 15 dollars. Rosa Parks was born on February 4th (of) 1913 and she died on October 24th (of) 2005. Following it, Martin Luther King decided to boycott buses in Montgomery. This was a pacific boycott. Consequently, during 381 days, no black people were allowed to take the bus. So, the Constitution decided to delete Jim Crow's law. However (=cependant), that law was applied. Martin Luther Kung did a lot of speeches about it. He was supported by J.F Kennedy. He said his famous speech on January, 15th (of) 1929, speech called "I have a dream", in front of the Lincoln Memorial, during the walking for the work and freedom. There, he showed his desire and his hope to see a spirit of fraternity and indiscriminately USA. He was murdered, the day of the walking for the freedom of black people, by a bullet in the jaw. He was murdered by a white person, who wanted to keep segregation. There was Malcolm X too, who was a Muslim and afro-American preacher. He is known for having defended black people during racial segregation.
On peut voir que tu as dû regarder pas mal de mots sur internet. Sinon, je te conseille de parle du Klu Klux Klan (qui existe toujours aujourd'hui), du lynchage des Noirs (des "ties-party" je crois), ... Par contre, Malcolm X était clairement contre ce mouvement : il pensait que la ségrégation sociale (tu parles de ségrégation sociale, et pas raciale dans ton exposé) était une bonne chose et pensait que tous les afro-Américains devaient retourner sur leur terre d'origine, l'Afrique. Parle aussi de Marcus Garvey, qui est important dans la lutte pour les droits des Noirs.
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They were obliged -> utilise forced je suis pas sur que to oblige existe en anglais
they have to go in restaurant do for them -> They HAD to go to specific restaurant, car c'est du passé la ségrégation ;)
Sinon oui, ca résume bien la situation
Si, si "obliged" existe bien en anglais. C'est "obligated", que les français utilisent beaucoup, qui n'existe absolument pas ;)