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bonjour je dois faire une lettre de motivation en anglais , je l'ai faite.. j'aimerais qu'on me la corrige , je ne suis pas très forte en anglais.Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
My name is vanessa alesci, i'm fourteen years old and i study in the college honore daumierEstimating naturally children's company, I'm used to knot easily the contact with them whatever their age.
Creative and player, I will be able to amuse them and find them activities, but I can also help the oldest to do homeworks.
Serious and responsible, I shall know how to to take care of children.
So, to convince you to take me as a babysitter, I suggest we meet one day.
Greetings
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Bonjour Vanelou,
Voici la correction de ton texte:
"My name is Vanessa Alesci, I'm fourteen years old and I study at the Honoré Daumier High School.
Loving children's company, I'm used to break the ice easily with them whatever their age.
Creative and playful, I will be able to amuse them and find them activities, but I can also help the eldest do their homework.
Serious and responsible, I shall know how to to take care of children.
So, to convince you to take me as a babysitter, I suggest we meet one day.
Greetings
Vanessa Alesci"
Cordialement,
Benjamin CNED 3ème
Voici la correction de ton texte:
"My name is Vanessa Alesci, I'm fourteen years old and I study at the Honoré Daumier High School.
Loving children's company, I'm used to break the ice easily with them whatever their age.
Creative and playful, I will be able to amuse them and find them activities, but I can also help the eldest do their homework.
Serious and responsible, I shall know how to to take care of children.
So, to convince you to take me as a babysitter, I suggest we meet one day.
Greetings
Vanessa Alesci"
Cordialement,
Benjamin CNED 3ème
Merci beaucoup de votre aide c'est très gentil .
merci beaucoup de m'avoir aider, c'est très gentil !
Ils ont besoin d'aide !
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ce n'est pas mal du tout!
My name is Vanessa Alesci, I'm fourteen years old and I'm studying in the Honoré Daumier Junior High School.
Loving children's company, I'm used to break the ice easily with them whatever their age.
Creative and playful, I will be able to amuse them and find activities to do, but I can also help the oldest to do their homework.
Serious and responsible, I shall know how to take care of your children.
So, to convince you more to take me as a babysitter, I suggest we meet.
Greetings
Je pense qu'avec ça c'est bon!