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Yesterday I had eaten to the restaurant, I was to go to the dance and to the park. Then I did homework and I have achété of the clothes. My mére had given me some money(silver) and had told me a history(story). I had seen a dress but I did not obtain him(it). I had brought to my mére its watch. I had given my bag to my sister so that she(it) takes him(it) Aprés him(it) to dine I have to watch TV ett I slept10 commentaires pour ce devoir
YA BEAUCOUP DE FAUTES
tu peuxme corriger ?
Je dirais :
"Yesterday I ATE to A restaurant, I WENT to the dance and to the park. Then I did MY homework and I BOUGHT SOME clothes ..."
"mére" => mother
Enfin c'est à vérifier, je ne suis pas super super good in english...
bon courage.
"Yesterday I ATE to A restaurant, I WENT to the dance and to the park. Then I did MY homework and I BOUGHT SOME clothes ..."
"mére" => mother
Enfin c'est à vérifier, je ne suis pas super super good in english...
bon courage.
Je te dis là où il peut y avoir des faute :
"had eaten" tu ne peux pas mettre les deux.
"MY homework"
acheter : to buy. "I bought clothes"
"My mother"
Par contre je n'ai pas compris ta phrase où tu dis qu'elle t'a raconté une histoire...
mets juste "brought" pas de "had"
Pareil pour "given"
"Après" : "after" ou "then"
"et" : "and"
Voilà.
"had eaten" tu ne peux pas mettre les deux.
"MY homework"
acheter : to buy. "I bought clothes"
"My mother"
Par contre je n'ai pas compris ta phrase où tu dis qu'elle t'a raconté une histoire...
mets juste "brought" pas de "had"
Pareil pour "given"
"Après" : "after" ou "then"
"et" : "and"
Voilà.
merci
Il y a archi hyper beaucoup d'erreur donc ne rends pas ce travaille a ton prof !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
JE TE DIS SA CAR J'étais en Angleterre pendant 7ans !!!!!!
Yesterday, I ate to a restaurant, I went to the dance and to the park. Then, I did my homework and I bought clothes. My mother gave me some money and told me a story. I saw a dress but I didn't get it.
After dinner, I watched TV before sleeping.
I had brought to my mére its watch. I had given my bag to my sister so that she(it) takes him(it)
Je n'ai pas vraiment compris ce que tu as voulu dire dans ces deux phrases...
After dinner, I watched TV before sleeping.
I had brought to my mére its watch. I had given my bag to my sister so that she(it) takes him(it)
Je n'ai pas vraiment compris ce que tu as voulu dire dans ces deux phrases...
Deuxieme ligne : I buy a clothes.
My mère ? my mum *
And I go to sleep.
My mère ? my mum *
And I go to sleep.
Buy => Bought.
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