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Voici mon devoir d'anglais je doit essaye de faire une rédaction
a la suite de 10 lignes
Voici mon devoi d'anglais je doit essaye de faire une redaction
a la suite de 10 lignes
l'histoire se passe sur une plage quand le narrateur decite de faire de la plonge
e et voit des coraux et des couleurs magnifique
soudain il appercoit un reste
de naufrage et quelques chose passe derriere lui et voix une forme blanche
J'ai bessoin d'traduction et d'une suite assez urgent c'est pour demain
merci a tous
when chloe and I arrived on the on the long sandy beach,it was very hot.there were some people swimming or playing in the waves while others were relaxing under beach umbrellas.the sun was beating down the deep blue sea in front of us was just appealing chloe wanted to sunbathe so I decided to go snorkelling on my own.I adjusted my mask and my snorkel put on my flippers and advanced into the waterit felt so cool after the heat of the beach.I swam a few yards and I saw the first corals on my left what a fantastic sight the red and purple corals with yellow and blu fish swimming among them ,the green seaweeds and the blu water,it was a strom of coulours there were also extraordinary seashells with stange shapes , all this was so unique.
I was admiring all these marvels when something in the distance caught my eye I swam towards it to see what it was after a few strokes I saw the remains of a shipwreck and I decided to have a lookyou never know there might be a treasure in it, I thought.I was exploring the wreck looking for hidden treasure when I felt something pass behind meI turned round but saw nothing I continued my search for treasure then felt something againthis time I thought I was in danger I started to worry I raised my heat and suddenly I saw an enormous white form coming towards me
when chloe and I arrived on the on the long sandy beach,it was very hot.there were some people swimming or playing in the waves while others were relaxing under beach umbrellas.the sun was beating down the deep blue sea in front of us was just appealing chloe wanted to sunbathe so I decided to go snorkelling on my own.I adjusted my mask and my snorkel put on my flippers and advanced into the waterit felt so cool after the heat of the beach.I swam a few yards and I saw the first corals on my left what a fantastic sight the red and purple corals with yellow and blu fish swimming among them ,the green seaweeds and the blu water,it was a strom of coulours there were also extraordinary seashells with stange shapes , all this was so unique.
I was admiring all these marvels when something in the distance caught my eye I swam towards it to see what it was after a few strokes I saw the remains of a shipwreck and I decided to have a lookyou never know there might be a treasure in it, I thought.I was exploring the wreck looking for hidden treasure when I felt something pass behind meI turned round but saw nothing I continued my search for treasure then felt something againthis time I thought I was in danger I started to worry I raised my heat and suddenly I saw an enormous white form coming towards me
Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
l'histoire se passe sur une plage quand le narrateur decite de faire de la plonge
e et voit des coraux et des couleurs magnifique
soudain il aperçoit un reste
de naufrage et quelques chose passe derriere lui et voix une forme blanche
J'ai besoin d'traduction et d'une suite assez urgent c'est pour demain
merci a tous
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ce texte est donne par le prof et maintenant a moi de faire la suite quand j'apercoit la
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où est le soucis, tu as déjà ton texte, et après lecture, il me paraît déjà très bien, tu l'a bien organisé et à la fin exprime tes entiments quand tu vois la forme, "j'était soudianement effrayé, il se passait quelque qui n'était pas normal, je commencé à suffoquer, incapable de remonter à la surface, je vis flou, puis un trou noir..."
j'ai compris le travail c'est faire une suite humoristique quand je voit la forme blance