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A summer night, an young teenager, Lizzie walked on the forest. Suddenly she heard strange noices so she hid behind a bush. From here, she saw an enormous shadow who held a lantern and ran to the petrol station. Like she is curious, she decided to follow him. BFG was eating petrol when he noticed that Lizzie has seen him. He kidnapped her, not because he was mean, but because he was afraid that she will tell someone about him. If people know about him, he will be captured.Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
Voilà ce que j'ai écrit, pouvez vous me dire si il y a des fautes?merci de votra aide.
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Tres bon texte , je ne vois pas de fautes ( je pense) a part que tu devrais dire " a young " et non pas " an young " .
mais y est une voyelle et on rayoute toujours un 'n' à 'a' devant un mot commencant par une voyelle.
Mais peut-être que tu as raison et que c'est une exeption!
si , je pense que c'est une exception , je peux te trouver
plusieurs exemples comme sur cette couverture d'un livre : http://www.amazon.fr/gp/product/images/B000025NAR/ref=dp_image_0?ie=UTF8&n=301062&s=music ou bien dans la celebre biographie de anne frank http://static.letsbuyit.com/filer/images/fr/products/original/84/41/anne-frank-the-diary-of-a-young-girl-8441379.jpeg voila , j'espere t'avoir aidé .
plusieurs exemples comme sur cette couverture d'un livre : http://www.amazon.fr/gp/product/images/B000025NAR/ref=dp_image_0?ie=UTF8&n=301062&s=music ou bien dans la celebre biographie de anne frank http://static.letsbuyit.com/filer/images/fr/products/original/84/41/anne-frank-the-diary-of-a-young-girl-8441379.jpeg voila , j'espere t'avoir aidé .
ok merci pour ton aide !
A summer night, an young teenager, Lizzie walked on the forest. Suddenly she heard strange noises so she hid behind a bush. From here, she saw an enormous shadow who held a lantern and ran to the petrol station. as she was curious, she decided to follow him. BFG was eating petrol when he noticed that Lizzie had seen him. He kidnapped her, not because he was mean, but because he was afraid that she would tell someone about him. If people knew about him, he would be captured.
noises, as she is curious(non pas like)
salut je sui bilingue et je peux te certifier que c'est A young et pas AN young c une exeption je vais te trouver la regle
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