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bonjour pouvez vous me corriger svp c 'est pour demain :) Merci d'anvanceRésumé: Nat, sa femme et ses deux enfants vivent à coté de la mer. Ils aimaient regarder la mer et les oiseaux. Cette année le climat à changer. Le temps est devenu très froid . Ils y 'avaient beaucoup plus d'oiseau que l'an dernier . Les oiseaux faisaient beaucoup de bruit . Ses oiseaux, avaient faim. . Ils sont dangereux . Les oiseaux veulent tuer Nat et sa famille. Ils essayent d'entrer dans leur maison.
Les oiseaux vont-ils réussir à tuer Nat et sa famille?
J'ai bien aimai ce livre car il y 'avait beaucoup de suspense et aussi car on a tout de suite on a envie de savoir la fin . Ce livre est passionnant .
Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
Abstract: Nat, his wife and two children live beside the sea They loved watching the sea and birds. This year the climate to change. The weather became very cold. They 'were far more flies than last year. The birds were very noisy. His birds were hungry. . They are dangerous. Birds and Nat want to kill his family. They try to enter their home.The birds will they manage to kill Nat and his family?
I really loved her this book because there 'was a lot of suspense and also because it was right away we want to know the end. This book is fascinating.
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Je te conseille au lieu de mettre Nat, his wife and two children de mettre Nat, Nat's wife and Nat's children ou Nat and Nat's family après c'est toi qui décide
Nat, his wife and his two children live beside the sea They loved watching the sea and birds. This year the climate has changed. It became very cold. There were more flies than last year. The birds were very noisy. Tjis birds were hungry. . They are dangerous. Birds want to kill Nate & his family,so they tried to enter in his house!
The birds will they manage to kill Nat and his family?
I loved this book because there was a lot of suspens and also because we want to read the end! It was really interesting
The birds will they manage to kill Nat and his family?
I loved this book because there was a lot of suspens and also because we want to read the end! It was really interesting
Salut !
C'est très bien, à part : "This year the climate changed" , "Birds want to kill Nat and his family" et "because we wanted to know the end right away"
Bonne chance !
Ba,je te le fais ta correction :
Nat, his wife and two children live beside the sea They loved watching the sea and birds. This year the climate to change. The weather became very cold. They 'were far more flies than last year. The birds were very noisy. His birds were hungry. . They are dangerous. Birds and Nat want to kill his family. They try to enter their home.
The birds will they manage to kill Nat and his family?
Nat, his wife and two children live beside the sea They loved watching the sea and birds. This year the climate to change. The weather became very cold. They 'were far more flies than last year. The birds were very noisy. His birds were hungry. . They are dangerous. Birds and Nat want to kill his family. They try to enter their home.
The birds will they manage to kill Nat and his family?
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Plutôt que "beside" j'aurais utilisé "near to"
"loved" c'est plus pour une personne, j'aurais mis "like" et ce verbe s'utilise avec "to" et non pas avec "-ing"
"to change" est un infinitif, alors que dans ta phrase c'est un verbe conjugué au passé. Plutôt que de répéter "the weather" dans la phrase d'après, tu peux juste mettre "it".
"His birds were hungry." les oiseaux de qui ?
"Birds and Nat want to kill his family." = Les oiseaux et Nat veulent tuer sa famille.
The birds will they manage to kill Nat and his family?
"her this book" : il y a un mot de trop pour dire "son livre" ou "ce livre"
Voilà pour la correction, essaye de voir si tu réussi à corriger les erreurs que je t'ai montré :)