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Bonjour,
Un agent de police adresse un courrier à Mrs Brown, pour la conseiller, afin d'éviter d'être cambrioler.
Je dois utiliser ces réponses :
- leave lights on at home when you go out
- leave radio on when you go out so that it looks like you are in
-lock all doors when you go outside and do some gardening
- fit burglar alarm
-check all doors and windows before leaving the house
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When you leave home you should keep lights and radio on so thieves will think you're present.
You should lock all doors and windows before leaving your home even when you are just going to the garden.
You should install an alarm which can be useful to scare thieves.
Follow my advice and everything will be fine !
Pourriez-vous s'il vous plait corriger mes erreurs, et m'aider à varier les modaux (obligations, interdictions) et a donner un ordre.
Je vous remercie d'avance pour votre aide, et je me permets de souhaiter une TRES BONNE FÊTE A TOUTES LES MAMANS de ce site :)
Bonne journée.
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Pas vraiment de grande erreurs :
Dear Mrs Brown, here are a few simple steps that will efficiently prevent burglars from breaking into your house :
First you must check that all doors and windows are properly closed before going out. May I suggest fitting a burglar alarm in your home ? In case of an intrusion, the loud noise shall alert the neighbours that someting is wrong !When leaving your house, you could also keep lights and radio on, to make people believe you're home - and scare thieves. Don't forget to lock doors when you're gardening ! You might think that all these steps are unnecessary, but it can save you a lot of trouble !
Pas vraiment de grande erreurs : Mais quand même un peu
Dear Mrs Brown, here are a few simple steps that will efficiently prevent burglars from breaking into your house :
First you must check that all doors and windows are properly closed before going out. May I suggest fitting a burglar alarm in your home ? In case of an intrusion, the loud noise shall alert the neighbours that someting is wrong !When leaving your house, you could also keep lights and radio on, to make people believe you're home - and scare thieves. Don't forget to lock doors when you're gardening ! You might think that all these steps are unnecessary, but it can save you a lot of trouble !
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Pas d'erreurs dans tes phrases. Suggestions de variations sur les modaux :
Dear Mrs Brown, here are a few simple steps that will efficiently prevent burglars from breaking into your house :
First you must check that all doors and windows are properly closed before going out. May I suggest fitting a burglar alarm in your home ? In case of an intrusion, the loud noise shall alert the neighbours that someting is wrong ! When leaving your house, you could also keep lights and radio on, to make people believe you're home - and scare thieves. Don't forget to lock doors when you're gardening ! You might think that all these steps are unnecessary, but it can save you a lot of trouble !