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je vous demende de maider svpp il fo que je face une description sur david guetta en anglais et jai fai beaucoup de fote sur mon texte que g ecritalors je vous pris de me coriger mon texte et de me lameliorai svppp !
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his name is david guetta , he has got hair short and brown , he has got eyes brown and he is normal , he is tall and thin . opinion : he is good dj and his tall celebrity . he wolk in toute la france.(je ne c pas comment dire toute ) bref vou puver me coriger mon texte ??
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Je corrige juste ce que Martine02 a dit:
My opinion is : he is a good DJ and he is a big celebrity.
He works in all of France.
My opinion is : he is a good DJ and he is a big celebrity.
He works in all of France.
voilà ma traduction :
His name is David Guetta, he has got short brown hair.
He has got brown eyes, and he is normal
He is tall and thin.
My opinion is : he is a good DJ and he has a big celebrity.
He works in all the world .
His name is David Guetta, he has got short brown hair.
He has got brown eyes, and he is normal
He is tall and thin.
My opinion is : he is a good DJ and he has a big celebrity.
He works in all the world .
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je corrige
His name is David Guetta.
He has got short brown hair.
He has got brown eyes, and he is normal (?)
He is tall and thin.
My opinion is : he is a good DJ and he has a big celebrity.
He works in all the France.
(all= toute)
j'ai rajouté la ponctuation, et les articles aussi.
Je n'ai pas compris ce que tu veux dire par "he is normal" (il est normal?)