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Bonjour , voila la consigne: Write a conversation between a teenager and /his/her parents. the parents ask him/her to help (look after the litlle sister or brother or help with the housework or wash the car ect.) but she has other plans... They fight,then they negotiate.
voila ce que j'ai fait en français:
Maman: kate peut tu garder ta petite soeur ce soir. Ton pére et moi nous sommes invités chez des collégues de travail.
Kate:Oh non Maman, je ne peu pas je doit aller chez Fanny pour faire mon exposé .C'est vraiment important . Maman je suis vraiment désolé.
Papa: Ok,pas grave , nous pouvont appelés une babysiter.; mais nous avons besoin de toi samedi soir !
Kate: Ce Samedi soir? Pouquoi? Qu'aller vous faire?
Maman: Nous allons au cinéma avec ton oncle et ta tante.
Kate: Mais maman je ne peu pas je doit répeter mon texte pour le théatre avec Josh
Papa: ok pour cette fois , ta cousine viendra garder ta petite soeur. Mais Lundi apres l'école tu gardera ta soeur car ta mére et moi nous allons au théatre.
Kate: Je dois aller faire du shopping avec ma meilleure amie.
Papa:Kate! On ne te demandemande pas de garder ta petite soeur , on te l'ordonne. Tu est puni. Point final.
Kate : Combien de temps je serai puni???
Maman: Pendant un jour.
Kate : Est ce que je peu sortir faire du shopping Mercredi soir avec ma meilleur amie?
Papa:Oui , tu peu
Kate: Merci beaucoup Papa
Papa: Derien , jeune fille
En Anglais:
Mum: Kate can you look after you little sister at night? Your father and I have invited colleagues from.
Kate:Oh no mum , please,not at niht. I go to my présentation Fanny . It's very important. Mum ;i'm very sorry!.
Dad:okay, we can call a baby sitter. but we need you Saturday night!
Kate:This Saturday night? Why? What are you doing?
Mum: We're going to the cinéma with his uncle and aunt.
Kate:But mum I do not I repeat a text for the theater with Josh
Dad:ok this time, my cousin will keep your little sister. But Monday after school you will keep your sister because your mother and I are going to the theater.
Kate:I have to go shopping with my best friend.
Dad: Kate! We do ask you not ask to keep your little sister, we command you. You're gronded .
And that's final.
Kate:How long I will be gronded?
Mum:just for one day.
Kate:Do I just go out shopping last week with my best friend?
Dad:Yes tou may.
Kate:thank you dad!
Dad/you're welcome,young lady!
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Tu peux dire :
Mum: Kate can you look after your little sister tonight ? Your father and I are invited to colleagues house.
Kate: Oh no Mom i can't. I have to go to Fanny's to work on my presentation.
Mum : We're going to the cinema with your uncle and aunt.
Kate: But Mon i can't. I have to practice my text for theater with Josh.
Kate: How long will i be grounded ?
Kate: May I go shopping on Wednesday night with my best friend ?
Dad: Yes you may.
Bonne chance pour le reste. Il y'a encore des fautes
Mum: Kate can you look after your little sister tonight ? Your father and I are invited to colleagues house.
Kate: Oh no Mom i can't. I have to go to Fanny's to work on my presentation.
Mum : We're going to the cinema with your uncle and aunt.
Kate: But Mon i can't. I have to practice my text for theater with Josh.
Kate: How long will i be grounded ?
Kate: May I go shopping on Wednesday night with my best friend ?
Dad: Yes you may.
Bonne chance pour le reste. Il y'a encore des fautes
Tu peux dire :
Mum: Kate can you look after your little sister tonight ? Your father and I are invited to colleagues house.
Kate: Oh no Mom i can't. I have to go to Fanny's to work on my presentation.
Mum : We're going to the cinema with your uncle and aunt.
Kate: But Mon i can't. I have to practice my text for theater with Josh.
Kate: How long will i be grounded ?
Kate: May I go shopping on Wednesday night with my best friend ?
Dad: Yes you may.
Bonne chance pour le reste. Il y'a encore des fautes
Mum: Kate can you look after your little sister tonight ? Your father and I are invited to colleagues house.
Kate: Oh no Mom i can't. I have to go to Fanny's to work on my presentation.
Mum : We're going to the cinema with your uncle and aunt.
Kate: But Mon i can't. I have to practice my text for theater with Josh.
Kate: How long will i be grounded ?
Kate: May I go shopping on Wednesday night with my best friend ?
Dad: Yes you may.
Bonne chance pour le reste. Il y'a encore des fautes
Bonjour Beste22,
Je trouve que les corrections apportées par nos camarades sont bon! Bon travail à vous et a toi Beste22! Passez de bonnes vacances!!
Cordialement,
Benjamin CNED 3ème
Je trouve que les corrections apportées par nos camarades sont bon! Bon travail à vous et a toi Beste22! Passez de bonnes vacances!!
Cordialement,
Benjamin CNED 3ème
Bonjour
Ligne 7;
Au lieu de dire "his"; il aut que tu dises; your uncle, and your aunt
Voila; sinon, je n'en vois pas d'autres, mais je suis sure que celle ci en est une ...
Ligne 7;
Au lieu de dire "his"; il aut que tu dises; your uncle, and your aunt
Voila; sinon, je n'en vois pas d'autres, mais je suis sure que celle ci en est une ...
Bonne chance pour le reste. Il y'a encore des fautes
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Yasmine2010 | 19/12/2010 à 21:57
Tu peux dire :
Mum: Kate can you look after your little sister tonight ? Your father and I are invited to colleagues house.
Kate: Oh no Mom i can't. I have to go to Fanny's to work on my presentation.
Mum : We're going to the cinema with your uncle and aunt.
Kate: But Mon i can't. I have to practice my text for theater with Josh.
Kate: How long will i be grounded ?
Kate: May I go shopping on Wednesday night with my best friend ?
Dad: Yes you may.
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Tu devrais mettres des gap filler (bouches trou) pour enrichir ton texte et eviter certaines fautes regarde
Mum: Kate could you keep your little sister this evenning? Your father and me are invited by work friends.
Kate: Oh unfortunately no mum, not this night. I determined to go in fanny'house to finish our homework. I'm very sorry.
Dad: Okay never mind we can call a baby sitter but on saturday evenning you have to keep your sister.
Kate: You're kidding! this saturday? Why? What will you do?
Mum: We're plannig to go to the cinemawith your uncle and your aunt.Do I make myself clear?
Kate: Yes, but I can't stay at home to keep my little sister because i have to repeat my play with Josh.
Dad: Well, you see, for this time my cousin will keep your sister. But otherwise, on monday after school you have to keep your sister because your mother and me have decided to show a play at the theater.
Kate: You know, i determined to go to the shopping with my best friend.
Dad: Kate! You're pulling my leg aren't you! you're not allowed to decide again it's an order . You're punished. That's all. Got it?
Kate: How long i wil be punished?
Mum: If you're nice, just one day.
Kate: Then, I could go to the shopping with my friend?
Dad: Of course
Kate: Thanks a lot dad.
Dad: Don't mention it! my daughter
Voila je pense que c'est mieux les profs apprecient en général un texte du genre oral avec des expressions telle que bon, en plus, ensuite, sinon par contre ces expressions ne passe pas pour un controle fait en classe ou par exemple il faut ecrire une lettre parce que c'est de l'anglais oral.
Sur ce Joyeux noël et bonnes vacances!! :)
Mum: Kate could you keep your little sister this evenning? Your father and me are invited by work friends.
Kate: Oh unfortunately no mum, not this night. I determined to go in fanny'house to finish our homework. I'm very sorry.
Dad: Okay never mind we can call a baby sitter but on saturday evenning you have to keep your sister.
Kate: You're kidding! this saturday? Why? What will you do?
Mum: We're plannig to go to the cinemawith your uncle and your aunt.Do I make myself clear?
Kate: Yes, but I can't stay at home to keep my little sister because i have to repeat my play with Josh.
Dad: Well, you see, for this time my cousin will keep your sister. But otherwise, on monday after school you have to keep your sister because your mother and me have decided to show a play at the theater.
Kate: You know, i determined to go to the shopping with my best friend.
Dad: Kate! You're pulling my leg aren't you! you're not allowed to decide again it's an order . You're punished. That's all. Got it?
Kate: How long i wil be punished?
Mum: If you're nice, just one day.
Kate: Then, I could go to the shopping with my friend?
Dad: Of course
Kate: Thanks a lot dad.
Dad: Don't mention it! my daughter
Voila je pense que c'est mieux les profs apprecient en général un texte du genre oral avec des expressions telle que bon, en plus, ensuite, sinon par contre ces expressions ne passe pas pour un controle fait en classe ou par exemple il faut ecrire une lettre parce que c'est de l'anglais oral.
Sur ce Joyeux noël et bonnes vacances!! :)
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Voici quelques petits trucs pour améliorer ton dialogue :
- at night, tu peux le remplacer par : this evening.
-Ensuite, il faut dire: Your father and ME ARE invited.... et je ne suis pas sure de la traduction de" collègues de travail".
- I have to go to Fanny's house to do my presentation.
- What are you going to do? (qu'allez vous faire?)
- cinema (sans accent), ton oncle, YOUR uncle.
- But mum, I don't, I have to repeat my text....
- your mother and ME...
- I have to go to shopping
- Kate, we don't ask you to look after your sister..... ( je pense que look after est mieux dans ce cas que keep)
- Can I just .....
Voila je pense avoir corrigé certaine chose, demande moi si tu n'es pas d'accord ou si tu as des questions.