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Sujet du devoir
invent a character and imagine his ou her life.write from his ou her birth to hi ou her death give a many detail as possible(savoir evoquer des faits au passe utiliser le superlatif)
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Virginie is a singer ,she was born in 1958 in washington dc ,usashe was 1 husbend and 3 children.
in 1968 she began her profesional carrer.
in 1972 she had her first concert in new york.
in 1982 she was the championne from de concours singing .
at the age of 53 she was retired from singing and she dad at the age of 62 .
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Coucou, alors j'ai repéré quelques fautes :
Virginie was a singer ,she was born in 1958 in washington dc ,usa
she had a husband and got 3 children who's called Mary, John and Lucy.
in 1968 she began her profesional carrer she was only ten years old.
in 1972 she had her first concert in new york it was a success, there were so many people.
in 1982 she was the champion from de concours singing .
at the age of 53 she was retired from singing and she died because she was very sick at the age of 62 .
Voilà, tu peux toujours rajouter des détails.
Virginie was a singer ,she was born in 1958 in washington dc ,usa
she had a husband and got 3 children who's called Mary, John and Lucy.
in 1968 she began her profesional carrer she was only ten years old.
in 1972 she had her first concert in new york it was a success, there were so many people.
in 1982 she was the champion from de concours singing .
at the age of 53 she was retired from singing and she died because she was very sick at the age of 62 .
Voilà, tu peux toujours rajouter des détails.
Quelques corrections et ajouts aux bonnes idées de Montia:
she had a husband and got 3 children:the ELDEST Mary,John and Lucy, the YOUNGEST.
in 1982 she was the BEST singer in a competition and won one million dollars.
at the age of 53 she retired and she died because she was very sick at the age of 62 .
Quelques phrases à glisser avec des superlatifs:
She was the youngest professional singer in the world.
Bonne continuation
she had a husband and got 3 children:the ELDEST Mary,John and Lucy, the YOUNGEST.
in 1982 she was the BEST singer in a competition and won one million dollars.
at the age of 53 she retired and she died because she was very sick at the age of 62 .
Quelques phrases à glisser avec des superlatifs:
She was the youngest professional singer in the world.
Bonne continuation
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