anglais travail d'ecriture

Explique un peu mieu stp
Faut t-il fait des personnage qui ne sont pas d'accord sur les suggestion ?

oui c sa

après je ne sais pas si c'est sa ...

si math a raison ce qil a fait ce sont différentes suggestions

Salut, Je suis anglaise, Je peux t'aider avec sa ! :)

1ère Personne : So guys, where sould we go tonight ?
2ème Personne : Humm.. Why don't we go to the cinéma ?!
3ème Personne : No, ther's nothing on tonignt.. What about that new restaurtant down the road ?
1ère Personne : No, I've got a better idea, let's go camping !
3ème Personne : No way ! It's way to cold out there !
2ème Personne : Yeah ! You are just insane !
1ère personne : OkOk, let's just go to my house & watch a DvD eating pop corn !
2ème & 3ème Personne : Great idea ! See you later then !

Voila, Si c'est trop long a apprendre je peux faire plus facile & plus court.. :)

Bonjour Fifilol,

Meghan.Cgm a raison, mais il y a plusieurs erreurs. Je suis Anglais aussi! D'Australie, je suis au CNED :-)

Alors je vais rectifier...

1ère Personne : So guys, where should we go tonight?
2ème Personne : Hmm... Why don't we go to the cinemas?!
3ème Personne : No, there's nothing on tonight... What about that new restaurant down the road?
1ère Personne : No, I've got a better idea, let's go camping!
3ème Personne : No way! It's way to cold out there!
2ème Personne : Yeah! You are just insane!
1ère Personne : Okay fine then, let's just go to my house and watch a DVD while eating pop corn!
2ème & 3ème Personne: Great idea! See you later then!

Voilà, version, sans fautes, et en Anglais correct ;-)

Cordialement,

Benjamin CNED 3ème

Merci

- Are you free tomorrow night ? We could go to the cinema if you like.
- Yes, what's on ?
- Despicable me, it's a cartoon about someone who wants to shrink the moon in order to become the nastiest nasty of all.
- I'm not sure, may be we could just go for a drink somewhere ?
- Why, don't you like my choice of film ? We could see something else, if you like.
- No, it's not that, I'd like to go out and talk with friends. We could ask Mary and Georgina to come with us. It would be fun.
- OK, then. We'll ask them if they are free tomorrow.

Je ne comprend pas se que tu a ecrit !

Si tes personnages viennent de se rencontrer tu peux dire:
Hello, what's your name?
2eme personne: My name is(le nom de ta personne)
Where do you live?
I live in..............
Et tu continues comme ça avec l'age ses activités et ainsi de suite.
Je ne dois pas faire aussi bien que les anglais mais bon c'est toujours ça.

Voilà ce que j'ai fait qu'en pense tu ?

Josh: hello
Kate and Bryan: hi! Josh
Kate: listen guys, have you got any plans for Saturday night.
Bryan: how about going to the cinema?
Josh: no way! We go every week! I’ve got a better idea. Lets’ go to the cancer of Justin Biber
Kate: are you kidding! I don’t like his songs of that he sing baldy.
Bryan: why don’t we go to my house and watch a DVD while eating pop corn.
Josh and Kate: yes, great idea!
Kate: why don’t we invite Julia, Alice, Frank and Peter?
Bryan: Yes, see you later then

Voilà ce que j'ai fait qu'en pense tu ?

Josh: hello
Kate and Bryan: hi! Josh
Kate: listen guys, have you got any plans for Saturday night.
Bryan: how about going to the cinema?
Josh: no way! We go every week! I’ve got a better idea. Lets’ go to the cancer of Justin Biber
Kate: are you kidding! I don’t like his songs of that he sing baldy.
Bryan: why don’t we go to my house and watch a DVD while eating pop corn.
Josh and Kate: yes, great idea!
Kate: why don’t we invite Julia, Alice, Frank and Peter?
Bryan: Yes, see you later then