début du conte de cendrillon version moderne en anglais

There was once a man who lost his wife and remarried a
woman who had two daughters, nasty like her.
For its part, the man had a daughter, beautiful and nice.
As soon remarried, the stepmother revealed her true character:
Nothing was too good for his beloved daughters. All their whims were
satisfied. And daughter's husband ate the leftovers in the kitchen and slept in
cellar. She did the housework, preparing meals, served his half-sisters at the table ...
without complaint. Anyway, his father would not have listened.
In the evening, the work finally finished, she would sit by the fire, to
warm.
"Watch it! It is ridiculous, buttocks in the ash. If we called ...
Cinderwench.
Cinderwench, Cinderwench ... "

Right next to their house was a castle in which lived the son of
king. Neighbor, neighbors ... the two sisters were one day invited to the ball he gave.
They were crazy with joy:
"Cinderwench, my pearl necklace! "
The youngest sister, less evil than the eldest, was content to call
"Cinderella.
Cinderella, my golden slippers.
Cinderwench? 'd Have liked to go to the ball?
Me ... oh! "

And yet she was definitely the most beautiful and most graceful of all girls.
"My dear, why are you crying?
Oh! My fairy godmother, is that you?
You want to go to the ball? That makes you cry?
Yes.
Well, you go. "
More Cinderwench or even Cinderella, the fairy came to turn it into
Princess.
"Go out into the garden and bring me a pumpkin. "
The pumpkin became a golden coach to all doors.
The fairy was more than one trick in his magic bag, then caught six small
Mice that became the six most beautiful horses in the world.
"And for the check ... a rat should be fine.
Oh thank you sponsor.
Be careful at this time ... be back at the last stroke of the clock ringing
midnight. After the charm is broken and everything will resume its first form. "

On the palate, the festival was in full swing
"Who is that beautiful? You know, you? Oh, what grace? Well you saw
as she walks? She is the daughter of an emperor!
Be welcome in my castle. "
And taking her hand, the prince drew him into the dance.

After the dance, the prince placed his partner with him to present his
guests. Of course, her sisters as he nodded, but without recognizing it.
When midnight approached, she thought he needed to be back on time.
"Noble Prince, I must go now. "
Cinderella and went home where at the stroke of midnight the coach
again became pumpkin, horses, mice, his coat embroidered with gold rags
usual.

A few hours later,
"Cinderwench, Cinderwench!
Cinderella!
Cinderwench!
Good evening my sisters. So, have you had a good time? "
And they, to tell him everything Cinderella knew.
"There was a daughter of Emperor, at least, so she was, she was ... Yes
silly, to be off like that, so soon! "

And life resumed its normal course.
Until one day the prince held a ball again, hoping to find the
beautiful stranger with whom he fell in love.
The sisters put a lot more time trying to make themselves beautiful. Cinderella
donned them and helped them pass their robes, to withdraw to the board ....
"Good evening my sisters, have fun! "
Cinderella and ran into the garden picking a pumpkin, look for mouse
a rat ...
"Fairy, my Fairy Godmother!
Want to go back to the ball?
Yes, and I already have everything you need.
Good. But this time, we should add lackey place mats
under your feet. "
And so the lizards were warmed by the last rays of sun,
found themselves suddenly on two legs dressed and umbrella.

The arrival of Cinderella to the palace was more effective than the first time.
The prince himself came to welcome him and helped him down from his carriage while
as lizards, I mean the lackeys, unroll the carpet under their feet.

Cinderella and her prince danced, danced and danced!

"You tremble? What do you fear?
Excuse me. I must go. Goodbye "
And Cinderella left the ballroom, picked up his coat embroidered with gold,
began to run, arrived in court. But in her haste, she had lost
a shoe!
"Guard, have you seen a Princess go?
No, I only saw a poor girl and I found it ... "
That meant the pumpkin, mice, rats and lizards ...
The prince picked it up, as I said, collected the lost shoe.
"All the ladies of the kingdom are invited to try a pump. Prince
marry her whose foot the shoes.
Me, me, me. It's my turn to try. I want to try me first! "
But neither foot returned. Even by forcing with a shoehorn, nothing
was either beyond the toes or the heel crushed it! Hundreds
Thousands of women have tried. So much so that it was the turn of
Cinderella.
His foot slipped easily inside. And in order to convince the prince that
it was well known he was looking, she put in her other foot,
second pump she guarded.
"Is that you?
What is she! Cinderwench, Cinderella! "

Cinderella forgave her two ugly sisters, even married with two
greatest nobles of the kingdom and lived happily with her prince at last, which
she had many children.

Bonjour Yasnoub,

Voici la correction:

"Once upon a time there was a girl who was named Cinderella. She lived with her stepmother and her two ugly sisters. She had to tidy the house, to wash the car, to do the shopping, to cook to all the family. She was always forbidden to watch TV and to play on the computer, Cinderella was treated very badly."

Cordialement,

Benjamin CNED 3ème

=> Chickenmanben95, ta correction ressemble étrangement à la mienne, alors que j'ai rajouté des choses. Si tu veux seulement recevoir des points, cela n'en vaut pas la peine!

merci infiniment de ton aide.

Merci d'avoir pris la peine de m’écrire tout le conte en anglais de cendrillon.Merci encore...

Je te remercie aussi pour ton aide.