Présent perfect et préterit

Publié le 5 juin 2011 il y a 12A par Anonyme - Fin › 12 juin 2011 dans 12A
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Sujet du devoir

Qui peu me traduire sa en anglais en utilisant le présent perfect et le préterit . svp c'est pour demain . :) Merci d'avance


Je suis allé au Maroc , Dubaï, Paris et l'Espagne. Je suis allée au Maroc il y' a 2 ans pendant les grandes vacances . Je suis allée avec mes parents, ma sœur et mes frères . Nous avons visités le jardin majorel à Marrakech c'était trop beau . Nous avons aussi rendu visite à ma famille à Rabat .
Je suis allée à Dubaï il y' a un ans avec ma sœur. Nous sommes allées chez mon oncle . Il faisait trop chaud là-bas . Nous avons passée de bonne vacances.
Je suis allé a Paris ,il y' a trois ans pendant 10 jours. J'ai visité le musée du Louvre, vu la tour Eiffel. C'était pendants les vacances de pâques . Je suis allée en Espagne à Barcelone il y'a 1 ans pendant une semaine. C'était bien .
J'aimerai bien visité d'autre pays ou ville comme Londres,Tunisie,bresil et plein d'autre encore. J'aimerai trop allée a Philadelphie chez mon oncle.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

voici ce que j'ai fai j'ai utiliser que le preteri:

I went to Morocco, Dubai, Paris and Spain. I went to Morocco there has 2 years during the summer holidays. I went with my parents, my sister and my brothers. We visited the garden in Marrakech majorel was too good. We also visited my family in Rabat.
I went there in Dubai has a year with my sister. We went to my uncle. It was too hot there. We spent a good holiday.
I went to Paris, he has three years for 10 days. I visited the Louvre, saw the Eiffel Tower. It was during the Easter holidays. I went to Barcelona in Spain there is 1 year for a week. It was good.
I will like to visit another country or city like London, Tunisia, Brazil and many other yet. I would like too went to Philadelphia with my uncle.



9 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 5 juin 2011
I went to Morocco, Dubai, Paris and Spain. I went to Morocco 2 years ago during the summer holidays. I went there with my parents, my sister and my brothers. We visited the majorel garden in Marrakech, it was great. We also visited my family in Rabat.
I went in Dubai a year ago with my sister. We went to my uncle's. It was too hot there. We had a good vacation.
I went to Paris, three years ago for 10 days. I visited the Louvre, saw the Eiffel Tower. It was during the Easter holidays. I went to Barcelona in Spain a year ago for a week. It was nice.
I would like to visit other countries or cities like London, Tunisia, Brazil and many others. I would really like to go to Philadelphia to my uncle's.
Anonyme
Posté le 5 juin 2011
c'est ce que j'ai fait et ses faux
Anonyme
Posté le 5 juin 2011
I have been to Morocco, Dubai, Paris and Spain. I went to Morocco during summer vacation two years ago. I went there with my parents, my sister and my brothers. We visited the Majorel garden in Marrakech . It was so beautiful. We also visited my family in Rabat.
I went to Dubai with my sister a year ago. We went to my uncle's. It was too hot there. We spent a good holiday.
I went to Paris, three years ago. It was a ten-day stay. I visited the Louvre, saw the Eiffel Tower. It was during the Easter break. I went to Barcelona in Spain there one year ago and I stayed there for a week. It was good.
I would like to visit other countries such as Tunisia, Brazil and so on or cities like London for instance. I would like to go to Philadelphia with my uncle.
Anonyme
Posté le 5 juin 2011
A part la première phrase, tu ne peux pas mettre le reste de ton texte au présent perfect car tout est daté.
Si tu souhaites ajouter quelques formules au présent perfect, tu peux mettre
I love to travel. During all my trips, I have discovered other cultures, cuisines. Travels have enabled me to be more tolerant and to accept other cultures.

Anonyme
Posté le 6 juin 2011
I went to Morocco, Dubai, Paris and Spain. I went to Morocco there has 2 years during the summer holidays. I went with my parents, my sister and my brothers. We visited the garden in Marrakech majorel was too good. We also visited my family in Rabat.
I went there in Dubai has a year with my sister. We went to my uncle. It was too hot there. We spent a good holiday.
I went to Paris, he has three years for 10 days. I visited the Louvre, saw the Eiffel Tower. It was during the Easter holidays. I went to Barcelona in Spain there is 1 year for a week. It was good.
I will like to visit another country or city like London, Tunisia, Brazil and many other yet. I would like too went to Philadelphia with my uncle.
Anonyme
Posté le 7 juin 2011
la premiere reponse de nine2212 est la juste
Anonyme
Posté le 8 juin 2011
(Je te l'ai corrigé)
Anonyme
Posté le 9 juin 2011
I went to Morocco, Dubai, Paris and Spain. I went to Morocco he there ' is 2 years old during the summer holidays. I went with my relatives(parents), my sister and my brothers. We visited the majorel garden in Marrakesh it was too beautiful. We also visited my family in Rabat.
I went to Dubai he(it) there ' has one the years with my sister. We went to my uncle. It was too much warm over there. We passed of maid holidays.
I went he(it) has Paris, ' is three years old during 10 days. I visited the Musée du Louvre, saw the Eiffel Tower. It was counterparts Easter holidays. I went in Spain to Barcelona there is 1 the years during a week. It was good.
I shall like(love) visited well by the other country or the city as London, Tunisia, bresil and full of the other one else. I shall like too much path has Philadelphia at my uncle.

bisous j'éspère t'avoir aidé
Anonyme
Posté le 11 juin 2011
I went to Morocco, Dubai, Paris and Spain. I went to Morocco 2 years ago during the summer holidays. I went there with my parents, my sister and my brothers. We visited the majorel garden in Marrakech, it was great. We also visited my family in Rabat.
I went in Dubai a year ago with my sister. We went to my uncle's. It was too hot there. We had a good vacation.
I went to Paris, three years ago for 10 days. I visited the Louvre, saw the Eiffel Tower. It was during the Easter holidays. I went to Barcelona in Spain a year ago for a week. It was nice.
I would like to visit other countries or cities like London, Tunisia, Brazil and many others. I would really like to go to Philadelphia to my uncle.
BONNE CONTINIUATION.




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