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imagine un court texte sur pat .dis ce qu'il aime faire ou non ce dont il a besoin ou ce qu'il veut pour son anniversaire etc........Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
his mane his pate is a year old.his favorite pets are dogs.
he loves chocolate but! don't like pizza and végétables.
hits favorite sport is the football but is she doesn't like drawing and dancing.
fon his brithday he wants a new tee-shirt and a bike.
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C'est bien mais n'oublies pas d'accorder les verbes à la troisième personne du singulier (=il) !!
c'est bien
bonjour,
ton texte est bien ms quelques erreurs tu a oublier d'accorder des verbes à la 3eme pers du sing .
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ton texte est bien ms quelques erreurs tu a oublier d'accorder des verbes à la 3eme pers du sing .
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his mane his pate is a year old.
his favorite pets are dogs.
he loves chocolate but he doesn't like pizza and vegetables.
his favorite sport is football but he doesn't like drawing and dancing.
for his birthday he wants a new tee-shirt and a bike.
his favorite pets are dogs.
he loves chocolate but he doesn't like pizza and vegetables.
his favorite sport is football but he doesn't like drawing and dancing.
for his birthday he wants a new tee-shirt and a bike.
dsl je n'ai rien compris pour la premiere phrase je pense que c'est he mane his pate...bonne journée
His name is Pat and is one year old.
His favourite pets are dogs
He loves chocolate but he doesn't like pizza and vegetables.
His favourite sport is football and he doesn't like drawing and dancing.
For his birthday, he would like a new Tee Shirt and a bike
His favourite pets are dogs
He loves chocolate but he doesn't like pizza and vegetables.
His favourite sport is football and he doesn't like drawing and dancing.
For his birthday, he would like a new Tee Shirt and a bike
His name is pate AND HE IS ONE Year old .
his FAVOURITE pets are dog
He loves chocolate but HE DOESN'T like pizza and végétibales .
HIS FAVOURITE sport is the football but HE DOESN'T like drawing and dancing .
FOR his BIRTHDAY, he wants a new tee-shirt and a bike .
Les mots en gras sont le mot a corriger dans ton texte .
his FAVOURITE pets are dog
He loves chocolate but HE DOESN'T like pizza and végétibales .
HIS FAVOURITE sport is the football but HE DOESN'T like drawing and dancing .
FOR his BIRTHDAY, he wants a new tee-shirt and a bike .
Les mots en gras sont le mot a corriger dans ton texte .
Il y a en effet quelques erreurs :
his mane his pate is a year old.
=> His name IS Pate, is a year old. (mais quel age a-t-il ? Un an ?)
his favorite pets are dogs.
=> His favorite pets are dogs (ça c'est très bien)
he loves chocolate but! don't like pizza and végétables.
=> He loves chocolate but DOESN'T like pizza and vegetables (Attention au Doesn't !)
hits favorite sport is the football but is she doesn't like drawing and dancing.
=> HIS favorite sport is football but he doesn't like drawing and dancing. (Attention à l'article zéro, tu ne dois rien mettre avant football, sinon c'est bien))
fon his brithday he wants a new tee-shirt and a bike.
=>FOR his birthday, he wants a new tee-shirt and a bike (ta phrase est tout à fait correcte)
Voilà je pense que c'est bon, il faut juste que tu fasse attention à la troisième personne du singulier, la conjugaison anglaise n'est pas compliquée, il y a juste ce point qui est important au présent.
his mane his pate is a year old.
=> His name IS Pate, is a year old. (mais quel age a-t-il ? Un an ?)
his favorite pets are dogs.
=> His favorite pets are dogs (ça c'est très bien)
he loves chocolate but! don't like pizza and végétables.
=> He loves chocolate but DOESN'T like pizza and vegetables (Attention au Doesn't !)
hits favorite sport is the football but is she doesn't like drawing and dancing.
=> HIS favorite sport is football but he doesn't like drawing and dancing. (Attention à l'article zéro, tu ne dois rien mettre avant football, sinon c'est bien))
fon his brithday he wants a new tee-shirt and a bike.
=>FOR his birthday, he wants a new tee-shirt and a bike (ta phrase est tout à fait correcte)
Voilà je pense que c'est bon, il faut juste que tu fasse attention à la troisième personne du singulier, la conjugaison anglaise n'est pas compliquée, il y a juste ce point qui est important au présent.
Ils ont besoin d'aide !
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