Bac oral correction

Sujet du devoir

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The whites ,who belonged in the upper-class, dominated The Blacks. The whites made to work them but they didn't pay them contrary they tod the police. The legislation which are the dominant features of apartheid is Passbook. So Passooks were designed limit the movement of non-white population. That's why only black had it and they always had to carry it with them outside their homelands. Morever any white can ask them about their pass, perhaps of they hadn't it they would arrest or beat. As consequenc blacks hadn't freedom. To end of this discrimination
nelson Mandela fought against this system which ended when Nelson mandela became the first black president in 1994. Thanks him, the black has found their freedom by burning their passbook and they would have the right as the white.
Despite After decades of conflicts, there are still discrimination, racizm between both groups. However there are events of sport or other which came together the population. For example the application to organise the World Cup in south africa in 2010 had been retained thanksto Nelson mandela who fought to forbid this candidature of country because for him it's a means of reconciliated since The whites and the backs were moved closer because they supported the same team. This events contributed to the development of country despite the spending.

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