Essai en anglais (j'aimerai juste une correction)

Sujet du devoir

j'ai un sujet d'essai sur would you be ready to move to a foreign country one day ?
a faire bien sur en anglais

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

We can say that the conditions that can lead a person left his country one day to another the various. I'll try to answer this question would you be ready to move to a foreign country one day ?

I think the first reason that may lead me to go abroad the first desire to live to learn the customs and culture of the country where you installed or to enrich my vocabulary but I think the first desire to live in a foreign country is to realize the beauty of its landscapes, like me who remember visiting a region of a country whose scenery was grand and beautiful expanse without end, and deep silence of the Sahara which I speak my subjugate.

In my opinion I think the reasons that may lead me not to leave my country and all first, the lack of moral support from my family so for me because my family and my first hideout without my family I think I will not know which may be not. the second could be the fear of what to expect there as a foreign country certainly has not the same system as the country where you come from


In short I think I will be near to go to a foreign country for a day one for new adventures to learn a new culture and enrich my vocabulary. Countries which I think is going to see a near Japan because it is a fascinating country.