Lettre de présentation à un correspondant anglais

Publié le 1 mai 2012 il y a 11A par Anonyme - Fin › 8 mai 2012 dans 11A
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Bonjour, je dois écrire une lettre pour qu'une famille choisisse de m'héberger lors d'une colonie d'été aux USA. J'aimerais envoyer une lettre correcte , sans fautes d'orthographes etc, pourriez-vous me signaler d'éventuelles fautes? ou encore des conseils pour améliorer cette lettre? merci d'avance

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Dear sir or madam,

This summer I'll fly to the USA, and be accommodated by a family, maybe you. That's why I would like to present myself so that you know me better. My name is Julie, I'm 17. I live on the west coast of France, near to Brest, a nice place just on the seaside. Actually, I live with my two parents (my big sister and two brothers have already left the family house). I also have a little pet, whose name is Njut, it's a Russian hamster.

First, I decided to go to the USA to discover this country. It is for me a child's dream (many different cultures, landscapes, great monuments etc.). I'm actually at school in the 12th Gr, I would take in June the Hight School diploma. Next Year, I will study at the Business School of Brest; thus by this experience, I also hope to progress in English.

As regards my activities, my main passion is the sport. I practise judo three times a week, and I also often run. My second passion is cooking; every week-end, I work in a small Pizzeria, in which I prepare pizza, pastas, salads, potatoes.

I'm kind and sociable-natured. Also dynamic, I wish to take advantage of this journey as much as possible. I don't doubt that this experience will be memorable!

Looking forward to seeing you soon,
Yours sincerely,



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Anonyme
Posté le 2 mai 2012
Dear sir and madam,

This summer I am flying to the USA, and will be living in a US family, maybe in your family. That's why I would like to introduce myself so that you know me better. My name is Julie, I'm 17 years old. I live on the west coast of France, near Brest, a nice place just on the seaside. I am currently living with my parents (my older sister and two brothers have already left the family house). I also have a little pet, whose name is Njut, it's a Russian hamster.

First, I have decided to go to the USA because I want to discover this country. It is for me a child's dream (many different cultures, landscapes, great monuments etc.). I'm currently at school in the 12th Gr, I will take the High School degree in June. Next Year, I will study at the Business School of Brest; thus with my experience in the US, I also hope to make some progress in English.

Regarding my activities, my main passion is sport. I practise judo three times a week, and I often run too. My second passion is cooking; every week-end, I work in a small Pizzeria, in which I prepare pizza, pastas, salads, potatoes.

I'm kind and sociable and also dynamic, I would like to take advantage of this stay as much as possible. I don't doubt that this experience will be memorable!

Looking forward to seeing you soon,

Best regards

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