Lettre écrite en anglais. Correction des fautes simplement.

Sujet du devoir

Bonjour,

On me demande d'écrire une lettre en Anglais, ce que j'ai fais. J'aimerais que l'on me dise les éventuelles fautes d'orthographe, de grammaire, ou de conjugaison.

Merci d'avance.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

My dear Sherley,
I received the letter that you sent the very same day my departure to me, so that I receive it as soon as possible. They was good to receive news of your share. Me, I go very well, you would see here, as it is different from London! I did not believe my eyes of them! This effervesence! It is splendid! You will never guess what arrived to me last Thursday. Do you remember my correspondent Mike? It is him who had found me this apartment, and he announced perhaps to me that he would have a place for me in his company. It is fantastic! All thus occurs to wonders, but I cannot say that my happiness is complete. Oh! I see you already telling me to stop feeling sorry for me! But how to stop feeling sorry for me of your absence at my sides? It is what I regret more. I place much hopes as Mike, and his offer. So really, I obtain this job, I could remain here, in San Francisco, and if you always agree to support my small (let us be realities, large. ) defects, you will be able soon to join me, and we will be able to found our family here, together.
I must go there now, I wait with interest to have your news.
With all my love,
Daren.