oral bac - idée de progrés

Sujet du devoir

Bonjour,

Je finalise ma problématique pour le bac d'anglais sur le thème idée de progrès.

J'aurais besoin d'aide afin de savoir si ma problématique est correcte et le texe suffisant pour le bac. Encore merci pour votre aide.

I am going to talk about the notion of the idea of progress.

The idea of progress basically consists in believing that the world can become better in terms of arts, science, technology, liberty and quality of life.

Progress helps humanity to devolopping hisself but it can also causes more problem then it salves.

I would like to propose the question « to what extend does the place of screens and phone in our everyday life ».

First of all, I think progress is essential to evolue. History is made of progress and evolution that have allowed the word to be what it’s today. Since the appearance of the smartphone, the internet and social networks, our behavior (comportement) changed a lot, an our habits of life. Today we became dependent of this new technologie which invaded our everyday life.

In order to illustrate this notion, I have chosen a text about Steve jobs … demonstrates how the parents are obliged to manage and  limit the time their children in front of screens. And the dangers about the harmful content like pornography, bullying.

Another text « teen digital detox », give exemples how to live without screens or phone. The result indicates that we are hooked to this new technology and that few people finallement cannot do without it.

Finally, Progress implies change and evolution  and throughout history most of the advances have been positive. However the rhythm of progress seems to have accelerated over the last few decades and  the technological breakthroughs and scientific developments are causing  some people to question this progress.

Finally, we notice this technologie can have fatal effects on our everyday life and alienate us.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

je souhaite savoir si mon texte et ma problématique sont corrects pour l'oral du bac. Merci pour votre aide