Oral d'anglais sur la notion "Myths and Heroes"

Publié le 9 mai 2016 il y a 7A par Anonyme - Fin › 13 mai 2016 dans 7A
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Sujet du devoir

I am going to talk about the notion « myths and heroes ». First of all I would like to give a definition of this notion:  

A hero is a story featuring supernatural beings, imaginary actions, collective fantasies, etc..A hero is a person who is admired for his or her achievements, qualities and for a great courage.

 In order to illustrate this notion, I have chosen to talk about few american heroes.

I will use 4 documents.

 

My first document is a picture of Martin Luther King, giving his spech « I have a Dream » in 1963, in Washington. He became a hero in the sixties, as the leader of the African-american Civil Rights Movement. He fought all his life for equality among races, and his tragic death in 1968 turned him into a legend. Fifty years after his death, he is still seen as one of the most prominent hero of the 20th century.

«I have a dream» became one of the most famous speeches of all time. Even Barack Obama cites it as an inspiration.

 My second document is a text of Malala. She is fought for girl’s education in Pakistan. Indeed it shows the influence of the Taliban in the Pakistani valley. She referred in particular to the public floggings and destruction of girls schools, banning television, dance and music.

This girl is considered a heroin because she fought for the girls right to get an education, not only in Pakistan but all over the world.

She knew that, by doing this, she risked her life, she had been threatened before.

 

Finally I speak of the american dream. The american dream is that anyone who works really hard can succeed, become rich and have a great life, no matter where they come from. This is a chance available to all. The American dream is for many people viewed as a myth, but it is nevertheless one of the main engines that allow people to migrate to the United States.

 

 

Martin Luther King and Malala are great examples of the american dream, having worked really hard to attain immense levels of success.

We can also relate these document to the notion «the idea of progress» as what Martin Luther King did contributed to a change in rights for black people in the USA.

 

 




2 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 9 mai 2016

very good

Anonyme
Posté le 12 mai 2016

Bonjour, c'est vraiment pas mal.
Quelques erreurs :

"A hero is a story featuring supernatural beings" => Je suppose que ici tu parles de myth et pas de hero

"I have chosen to talk about few american heroes" => Il faut utiliser "a few" ou "some", "few" tout seul ne convient pas ici.

"giving his spech" => "speech"

"in Washington." => "Washington D.C.". En effet, aux Etats-Unis, il y a un état qui s'appelle Washington, Martin Luther King a fait son discours dans la ville de Washington D.C.

" My second document is a text of Malala" => Si le texte parle de Malala, il faut dire "a text about Malala", si elle l'a écrit il faut dire "a text written by Malala"

"She is fought for" => "She fought for"

"This girl is considered a heroin" =>  Attention, en anglais "heroin" est une drogue, "heroine" est le féminin de hero

"The American dream is for many people viewed as a myth" => The American dream is viewed as a myth by many people

"these document" => these documents

 

Voilà, pas beaucoup d'erreurs, et la plupart ne concerne même pas l'oral.

Bon courage en tout cas.


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