orale d'anglais, correction grammatical

Sujet du devoir

Bonjour à tous !

Je prépare un orale d'anglais, mais étant d'une extrême nullité en langue, j'aurais besoin d'aide !

je voudrais juste que vous vérifiez si mes phrases sont grammaticalement correcte et si non m'expliquer pourquoi ?

J'ai déjà réparer un maximum d'erreur grâce au livre d'anglais mais sait-on jamais si des petites fautes s'y cache encore.

Merci de votre aide ~ 

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

His real name is Mohandas Karamchand Gandhi but the poeple simply call him Gandhi. Sometimes he was called as the Mahatmat Gandhi, wich mean in sanskrit language «  the great soul ». But in his all life he refused this nickname because he was very modest.
He was born the 2 october of 1869 in Porbandar. He comes from a Hindu family, and lived in the respect of traditional India rules. But when he grown up, he was convinced that he must break up with the traditions and copy the english life style. So in 1888 he went in England for study.
In London, Gandhi studied the Law, and in the same time he read plenty of text about Boudha, Jesus, Mahomet and theoligist works. It turn him in a very sensible and philosophical person.This differents texts gave him inspiration for the greatest act of his life.

Indeed, in 1893 he was send in south Africa to practice as a lawyer. In this country, he discovered the Apartheid. He was chocked and began to be interesting in politic. When he come back to India, he decided to organize the farmer and the population to fight against the increasing of the taxes and the discrimination. He created a movement for release India. Because in this time, India was a british colony.
All this acts was based on the nonviolent and the passiv protestation. For exemple he sewed his clothes himself, the farmers was organize for feed the population without need the state, and without taxes. He organize a famous march wich is call « the salt's march » to protest against the increasin of the price of the salt.
He starved himself to put pressur on the british government. In fact, thanks to his importants actions and his generousity, Gandhi was a popular character in Europa. So british government haved to obey
Gandhi to not giving a bad image of Great Britannia.
When Gandhi became the leader of the national indianer conference, he decided to campagning to help poor people, to fight against the woman's discrimination and injustices associated wiht the social cast. Because of his important activism, he was jailed during a long time and repeatedly.

I think we can considered Gandhi as a Heroic person because he's got all the characteristics that we expected from a Hero. He had never giving up until his goal and he risk his personal safety to release India.
He encourage poeple to be united and overcome the discrimination to changing society for better. He doesn't expecting personal recognition, instead of that he was very modest and considered himself like a common person.
And on top of that, the Leader Gandhi was an exemple and a inspiration for many others heroic poeople. For exemple, Rosa park and Martin Luther King used the principe of nonviolent civil disobedience, invented by Gandhi, to fight against injustices in theire countries. Gandhi is distinguished by exeptional bravery, kindness and level-headed.
As any hero, he is idealize by the population and he is celebrated. In India, Gandhi's birthday is a public holiday and every Indianer know Gandhi as the father of the Nation.