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Publié le 27 nov. 2011 il y a 12A par Anonyme - Fin › 29 déc. 2011 dans 12A
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Garden fetes and village cricket are more old than theme pubs for child. It's more old-fashioned.


Garden fetes and village cricket are very present in England and several series britich. For me, it represent the life of British people, with happiness and sharing between people, relationships and friends are more important during this moment.


On the other hand, theme pubs are very different than adult party, when you are in theme pubs it's so crazy and you can have new meetings with friend and make new friends.
Students are very exiting about this party because they have a super social life in parallel hard studies.


Party with friends are values for people old and young.

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pourriez vous me corriger les fautes merci d'avance
Garden fetes and village cricket are more old than theme pubs for child. It's more old-fashioned.


Garden fetes and village cricket are very present in England and several series britich. For me, it represent the life of British people, with happiness and sharing between people, relationships and friends are more important during this moment.


On the other hand, theme pubs are very different than adult party, when you are in theme pubs it's so crazy and you can have new meetings with friend and make new friends.
Students are very exiting about this party because they have a super social life in parallel hard studies.


Party with friends are values for people old and young.

merci d'avance



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Anonyme
Posté le 27 nov. 2011
For a child, Garden fetes and village cricket are old fashioned. Theme pubs are more popular. Nevertheless, Garden fetes and village crickets are very important in England and they are often represented in British movie series.
In my eyes, they play a key role in the life of British people. They are the symbol of happiness, sharing and connection. On the other hand, theme pubs are very different from adult parties. Thus, when you are in a them pub, the atmosphere is crazy and you can meet new people and make new friends. Students are all excited during those parties because they relieve their stress due to their studies.
Parties with friends are essential for young and old people.
Anonyme
Posté le 28 nov. 2011
Garden festivals (ou parties)
On the one hand..........On the other hand (on est obligé de mettre les 2)
Thus you are in a themE pub
they evacuate their stress
Anonyme
Posté le 28 nov. 2011
Pour tina : Garden fetes c'est anglais (regarde le dico) D'ailleurs c'est en rapport avec le texte étudié
http://www.oundlebespokeevents.co.uk/garden-fetes-and-fun-days.html
2 non tu n'es pas obligée de mettre les deux
3. ok pour theme pub (faute de frappe)
4. they evacuate their stress (c'est très français) mais they relieve très anglais
Voilà un lien sur le stress
http://www.becomenatural.com/blog/2011/10/how-can-caregivers-relieve-their-stress/


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