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I am happy to have successfully my goal. I've had many apprehensions, but finally I've had that I wanted. Now I hope to reach at my ultimate goal who is to be of air force. For me, it is a challenge because the most of my family thinks that is it too hard for me. But it is not because I am a health problem that I can't do the job that I want. My future, it is me, that the selected and I going to shows at all the people that it can make that one wants with the old health problem so that it to give Worth.
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I am happy having met my goals sucessfuly despite the fact that i had a lots of aprenhenssions , but finally i achieved them . Now I hope reaching my ultimate goal which is tojoin air force. to my point of view, this is a challenge because most of my family think that it is too hard for me. But i'm conveined on the contrary that i am able to succeed .I have a health problem wich avoid me to do the job I want. My future, it is me, that the selected and Iam going to show at all the people that it can make that one wants with the old health problem so that it to give Worth. Là je ne comprends pas du tout
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I am happy to success in my goal // [ou] // I am happy to be successful in my goal.
I've had many apprehensions, but finally, I have what I wanted.
Now, I hope to reach my ultimate goal : to enter in the air force.
For me, it is a challenge because a lot of my family thinks that is it too hard for me because I have health problem.
But I don't agree ! I know that I can do the job that I want.
It is my future and it has to be selected by me ! I'm going to show everyone that I can do the job of my dreameven with the old health problem that I have.
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