Serait-il possible de me corriger mon expression en anglais

Publié le 1 nov. 2011 il y a 12A par Anonyme - Fin › 3 nov. 2011 dans 12A
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Sujet du devoir

C'est un devoir maison et le sujet est : This kind of situation is called a blind date : in your opinion what could the risks involved be?
Pourriez vous me corriger si j'ai fais des fautes d'orthographe, grammaire ... .
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In the text, we can see that Bridie meet a man that she had never seen. This kind of situation is called a blind date. What are the dangers for her? What could the risks involved be ?

First, I think that it is not stupid to come with a friend, because we don't know the person even if we communicate with. For exemple, Bridie doesn't know if Pat is not a murderer, or maybe a pervert. He could come with other people and take away her in a secret place to kill her, or to rape her.. It's more and more frequent today.
Moreover, it is possible that the person want meet her to have the papers for the nationality. Bridie could have this situation, because Pat is an Indian and she believed that he was english. Furthermore we don't know if he has the english nationality, perhaps he wants just the papers and after he will leave her alone. We call this a grey marriage
Finally, the person could be poor and seek a house where he can live, where he can have money without working. Naturally, he belies her. He doesn't seek a serious relationship, he wants just to take advantage of her. Or maybe, he has an other wife and he seeks just a mistress, just a new life.

In conclusion, we can tell that a blind date is practical to meet persons but it's dangerous too, because we don't know who is the person that we're meeting, we don't know what he wants. So it is always important to be on our guard, we must be smart and careful. If we want meet a person, we must choose a place in which there are people, we must not to admit this person in our house if we don't know this person more.



6 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 1 nov. 2011
A la fin, il y a énormement de répétions de '' person ''.
Exemple : '' If we want meet a person '' -> '' If we want meet SOMEONE '' pour changer ;)
Essaye de corriger ça pour commencer.
Anonyme
Posté le 1 nov. 2011
A la fin, il y a énormement de répétions de '' person ''.
Exemple : '' If we want meet a person '' -> '' If we want meet SOMEONE '' pour changer ;)
Essaye de corriger ça pour commencer.
Anonyme
Posté le 1 nov. 2011
A la fin, il y a énormement de répétions de '' person ''.
Exemple : '' If we want meet a person '' -> '' If we want meet SOMEONE '' pour changer ;)
Essaye de corriger ça pour commencer.
Anonyme
Posté le 1 nov. 2011
A la fin, il y a énormement de répétions de '' person ''.
Exemple : '' If we want meet a person '' -> '' If we want meet SOMEONE '' pour changer ;)
Essaye de corriger ça pour commencer.
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Anonyme
Posté le 1 nov. 2011
In the text , we can see that Bridie met a man she had never seen. This kind of situation is called a blind date. What are the dangers for her?

First of all , I think that it is a good idea to come to the blind date along with a friend, because we don't know the person we are going to meet. For instance, Bridie doesn't know who Pat is. He may be a murderer or a sex predator. He could come with other people and take her to a secret place to kill her, or to rape her.. Unfortunately it is more and more frequent today.
Moreover, it is possible that the person wants to meet her to have have papers. The person may be undocumented and is looking to have legal papers to work. Bridie could be in this situation, because Pat is an Indian and she believed that he was English. Furthermore we don't know if he has the British citizenship, perhaps he wants just the papers and after he will leave her alone. We call this a grey marriage
Finally, the person could be poor and seek a house where he can live, where he can have money without working. Naturally, he relies on her. He doesn't seek a serious relationship, he wants just to take advantage of her. Or maybe, he has an other wife and he is looking for a mistress, a fling.

In conclusion, we can tell that a blind date is practical to meet people but it's dangerous too, because we don't know who the person is exactly, we don't know what he or she wants. So it is always important to be very careful If we want to meet someone, we must choose a crowded place, we must not let the person come into our house if he or she is a stranger.
Anonyme
Posté le 2 nov. 2011
Merci énormément pour votre aide apportée.

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