The landlady roahd dahl

Publié le 29 sept. 2016 il y a 7A par Anonyme - Fin › 2 oct. 2016 dans 7A
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Sujet du devoir

Coucou, dites j'aurais besoin d'aide pour mes fautes dans mon devoir. Je devais inventer une fin à la nouvelle The Landlady de Roald Dahl mais je sais que je fais beaucoup de fautes en anglais donc bien à vous si vous m'aider à me corriger. Voilà merci d'avance !

 

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Voilà où j'en suis:

The last words pronouced by the landlady resonated in billy's head. He could not help hearing the resonating words « only you », « only you ».

 

What was that mean ? Billy started wondering why there had not been other guests exept him and the landlady’s behaviour was more and more stressed out. She continued to observe him in silence. Billy wasn’t felt good, he began to feel heavy and his eyes were closing themselves.

« The tea… » Muttered Billy before collapsed on the sofa, unconscious.

 

When he wokes up, Billy was in a dark room lying down on the flour. His head was painfull and he was feeling numb. He regain consciousness and remind his last memories. That’s it ! The landlady had poisoned the tea.

Billy tried to get up but the flour swayed and his sight was blurred by the poison. He leaned on the wall to help him to get up and goes along until what he was discern as the door. He attempt to push the handle but the door remains closed.

« Somebody’s here ? Help me ! I’m locked ! Please ! » Cried Billy.

Only the silence replied him. Suddenly, the door opened and the landlady appeared smiling payfulled.

« So, my dear, are you comfortable ? »

« What do you want from me ? »replied Billy

« Oh I think you will be perfect for my collection »She said in a honey voice.

« What do you mean ? »

The landlady didn’t answer and tried to bring him out of the room. Billy started debatted but she was surprinsigly strong and had no difficulties to bring him until an empty and cold room. There were two life-size statues wich turned their backs from them. But when they getting closed, Billy realized with stupefaction that it was real men stuffed. The landlady stopped just beside and said :

« Oh dear Mr Mutholland and Mr Temple how are you today ? Doesn’t they seems to be larger than life ? Isn’t it Mr Weaver ? They just keeping me company my dear » She said with mischievious looking.

The fear overtakes Billy gradually and he beginning to panic. His hands were shaking and felt sweaty brow.

But suddenly, the Bed and Breakfast’s bell rang and the landlady dropped him of astonishment. Billy avail of that to run till the outside. He narrowly misses stumbled on the flour but keep going on. He was so closed when he heard the footsteps of the landlady who tried to catch up him. Billy finaly reached the door and opened quickly without care about the man who had knocking adn who was look at him with surprise. Billy keep running until he had no breath then he stoped to recover. Billy vowed never to return in a Bed & Breakfast. « In the end, the pub Bell & Dragon would have been better for me »He told himself.




1 commentaire pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 1 oct. 2016

Salut !

Except him ligne 5

Ensuite il y a on the floor et non pas on the flour (flour = farine mdr)

Personnellement j'aurais utilisé shout Billy au lieu de cried Billy mais ça va aussi.

Fais gaffe tu as mis deux fois flour


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