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j'ai un dm d'anglais pour demain sur les inuits et mon niveau d'anglais est juste catastrophique donc si une âme charitable veut bien essayer de décrypter et de corriger mes fautes je lui en serais très reconnaissante.
mon sujet est: after back in england, the narrator writes an article comparing the inuit european ways of life
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When I arriving back in England I saw for the first time my country with a subjective viewpoint :
I saw the contrast behind the inuit's and the european's lifestyles
First, Inuit had summer and winter camps in locations they returned to year after years when european rest in his house all the year because of his job
Secundly, Europeans have socials network but are alone when inuits live in groups and have an oral history what are more togetherness than european's school
Next, Inuit lives in skin tnts with whalebone frame works that are really diferent compare with the skyscrapers and the factories what we can see in London
All most, Inuits are mindful of nature but europeans have polluting way of life whith cars in all places, nuclear's energy and polluting factories.
To finish, the european's life its stressfully at the opposite of the inuit's life because of the inuit's area where all are white, appeasing, beautifull andcalmness
But if you go in inuit's area, don't forget to take fresh milk and vegetables because the only food over there are fish.
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When I came back to England, I saw, for the first time, my country with a subjective point of view :
I saw the contrast behind the inuits' and the european's lifestyle.
Firstly, Inuits have winter and summer camps in some places where they return each year. Whereas europeans stay in their houses all year because of their jobs.
Secondly, europeans use social networks but still feel alone unlike inuits that live in groups and have a real oral conversation, which is more convivial than talking through internet.
Next, Inuitslive in tents made of skin and whale bones that are completely different compared to skyscrapers and factories that we can see in London.
All most, Inuits are mindful of nature whereas europeans have a polluting way of life whith cars, nuclear energy and polluting factories everywhere.
To conclude, the european's life is stressful compared to the inuits' life since these live in very peaceful areas where the landscape is completely white that makes everything look really appeasing, beautiful and relaxing.
However, if you plan to travel to the inuits' area, don't forget to bring your own food with you because the only food that they eat is fish.
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When I arrived back in England, I saw for the first time my country with a subjective point of view :
I saw the contrast behind the inuit's and the european's lifestyles
First, Inuits had summer and winter camps in where they return to year after years whereas europeans stay in their houseall year long because of their job
Then, Europeans have social networks, but are alone, unlike inuits who live in groups and (have an oral history what are more togetherness than european's school)?
Next, Inuit lives in skin tents with whalebone frame works that are extremely diferent from the skyscrapers and the factories that we can see in London
(?All most), Inuits are mindful of nature, when europeans have a polluting way of life, as they use car almost on a daily basis, moreover they also harm the environnement with nuclear energy and factories that pollute the air we breathe.
To conclude, the european's life is stressful compared to the inuit' s, since these live in very peaceful areas where the landscape is completely white which is really appeasing, beautiful and calming
However, even if their life seems perfect, inuit's don't have it that easy, they don't have access to as many commodities as us, one proof of this, is that when you go to a inuit's tribe, you have to bring your own food because they only have fish