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Bonjoursje devait crée un texte, en utilisant 8 points de grammaire !
- le present
- le present be+ing
- la voix passive
- la proposition infinitive
- les if sentences
- le preterit
- le present perfect
- le futur
Pouvez regarder qi j'ai utiliser corretement les 8 points, et si j'a fait des fautes d'orthographes ou vovabulaires. Merci !
Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
Today I go to sleep at 10 pm as every night .Suddenly I met in full battlefield., I saw around me thousands of soldiers. They are fighting in front of my eyes. The war has started for a long time. Many Corpses were scattered on the ground.
I was in front of a terrifying show.
I shouted :
- I need someone to help me
A duel took place in front of me enter the captain and the soldier. But the soldier was killed by his enemy. I understood that if I does not fight , I will die in the fight .
Suddenly my eyes oppened, it was only a dream.
One thing is certain I'll be sleeping on the sofa tonight...!
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Mais je ne comprends pas, on te l'a déjà corrigé !
Non, enfait je devais crée un texte ( environ 100 mots ) en utilisants les 8 points que j'ai cité . Il n'est pas corriger !
J'aurait aimer savoir si j'avais bien utilisé les 8 points de grammaire et si je n'avais pas fait de fautes d'ortographes .
Merci pour ton aide :)
J'aurait aimer savoir si j'avais bien utilisé les 8 points de grammaire et si je n'avais pas fait de fautes d'ortographes .
Merci pour ton aide :)
Ok je vais te le corriger
Today I went to sleep at 10 pm as usual.
Suddenly I was in full battlefield., I saw around me thousands of soldiers. They were fighting in front of my eyes. The war had started for a long time. Many Corpses were scattered on the ground. I was in front of a terrifying show.
I shouted :
- I need someone to help me
A duel took place in front of me between the captain and the soldier. But the soldier was killed by his enemy. I understood that if I did not fight , I would die in the fight .
Suddenly my eyes oppened, it was only a dream.
One thing is certain I am sleeping on the sofa tonight and I will tell my friends about my nightmare tomorrow morning! I have never had such a bad dream in all my life.
Donc les formules utilisés
Prétérit oui
Présent progressif oui
If : oui
futur : oui
présent : oui
passif :
Suddenly I was in full battlefield., I saw around me thousands of soldiers. They were fighting in front of my eyes. The war had started for a long time. Many Corpses were scattered on the ground. I was in front of a terrifying show.
I shouted :
- I need someone to help me
A duel took place in front of me between the captain and the soldier. But the soldier was killed by his enemy. I understood that if I did not fight , I would die in the fight .
Suddenly my eyes oppened, it was only a dream.
One thing is certain I am sleeping on the sofa tonight and I will tell my friends about my nightmare tomorrow morning! I have never had such a bad dream in all my life.
Donc les formules utilisés
Prétérit oui
Présent progressif oui
If : oui
futur : oui
présent : oui
passif :
passif : oui
présent perfect : oui
présent perfect : oui
Toutes les formules ont été utilisées
bonne soirée
bonne soirée
Merci beaucoup pour ton aide :) !!
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