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Bonjour, je devais faire un exercice, écrire sur notre futur personnel (inventer) et je vous demande si vous pouvez le corriger car bien sur c'est noté, Merci d'avance voici le texte que j'ai fait:To begin with, i would like to make a lot of new friends at high school. Then, I want working at school to do the job I want to achieve. After that, I hope to go to college to study commerce. In my twenties, I dream to succeed in life and travel around the world at least once. In my thirties, I'll start my own business and I hope its going well. In my forties, my company will become so successful that I can sell it and make a great holiday! And in my fifties, I intend to travel and do all my wildest dreams (for example go to Japan) !! Finally, I may spend some time with my family in Tahiti and Costa Rica because I offered them a holiday !
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J'ai fait l'exercice que m'a était demandé de faire. Je vous demande de le corriger si il y a des faute d'orthographe, merci d'avance.1 commentaire pour ce devoir
First,I want to have a lot of friends in High School.Thon I want to work at scool as job.After that I hope to go to the secondary school for study the commerce.In my twenties,I dream to win my life ans travel atone the world at lady once.In my thirtees ,I'll start my own business and I hope it will be successful.In m'y fourties,my company will become so successful that I can sell it and have a great holiday.And in m'y fiftees,I want to travel and do all my wildedst dreams(for example go to Japan)!!Finally,I will spend some Time with my family in Tahiti and Costa Rica because I want holiday.
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