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Sujet du devoir
Bonjour.Pour la rentrée lundi prochain, je dois faire une analyse sur un document ( ci-jointe ). La présentation du document, la description, l'analyse ainsi que la conclusion. J'aimerais bien que l'on me corrige si ce n'est que les fautes.
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Présentation du document:This document is a picture. It is entitled "Save polar bears'. This picture deals with the global warming, the climate changes.
Description:
I can see a polar bear sitting on the groud and bear hand saying stop. The ground is filthy, there are papers on the ground. I can see a sentence means the global warmig, the disappearance of rare species ( la disparition des rares espèces ), and so it should choose a car producs less gas ( et donc il faut choisir une voiture qui produit moins de gaz ) it's a preventive measure.
Analyse:
Polar bear numbers are diminishing. This is due in part to global warming but also because the earth is polluted : cars which send out a lot of gas, when there is a traffic-jam, paper is not recycled and to throw into the street. Polar bears can be designated "homeless" because they breathe an unbreathable air and deforestation: to destroy their territory.
Conclusion:
We should use a bike instead of a car, or buy a car with little gas emission, recycled paper, we thrown't paper on the ground etc...
Merci à vous !
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-and bear hand saying stop = à la place je mettrai plutot " and he's (ou it's comme tu veux)saying stop with his hand " sa va mieux ac le début de ta phrase.
-I can see a sentence WHICH means.
-and so WE (au lieu de it) should choose a car WHICH producs less gas.
-Polar bear numbers are diminishing = je metrai plutot " the number of polar bears are diminishing"
-paper is not recycled and IS ( pas de TO )thROWN into the street.
-because they breathe an unbreathable air and deforestation = il manque quelque chose entre and et deforestation sinon la phrase veut dire que les ours respirent la déforestation.
- we thrown't paper on the ground = je mettrai " we should not throw papers on the ground".