Conseils pour améliorer mon exposé ?

Sujet du devoir

Bonjour, je cherche comment améliorer mon exposé (qui doit durer 5 minutes environ ...). Si vous pouviez m'aider à le corriger ça serait super. Merci d'avance. Yasmine.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

before I start my two minutes challenge, I want you to know that if you are too sensitive you should not watch the pictures that I’m going to show you during my presentation. It’s not for the faint of heart.
So, Today I will present you a movie that I saw two weeks ago with a friend. It's called Final Destination Five. This movie,written by Eric Heisserer and directed by Steven Quale is the fifth of the saga. This thriller and supernatural film use the third dimension. So first I will summarize the movie’s story and then, I will tell you why I liked this movie and I will try to convince you to go to the cinema in order to see finale destination five.
So, on a business trip, Sam Lawton, an employed had a vision, more precisely a premonition. He saw that the bridge was going to collapse. That’s why when the bridge began to collapse; Sam rushed all of his friends to safety. Thanks to him, all his friends survived the accident. Few days later, a strange man called William Bludworth tells the survivors that there is no way you can cheat the death and warned the group that death is after them and that it’s inevitable. So, during the film we can see the survivors die one by one. This is the story of the movie, it’s a little bit complicated so I hope I was clear.
To my mind, I really liked this movie because I found it full of suspense and full of tension. I enjoyed the great use of the thrid dimension and the sens of humour. However, it’s unfortunately not the grimmest film I’ve seen but it may be the most inexplicable one. Final Destination five is maybe the last movie of the saga but it’s certainly not the least. If you like blood, surnatural and thrillers, you should see this movie. Trust me you will not regret it !

In closing I would show you the trailer of this great movie.