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Bonsoir, j'ai un texte de quelques lignes à écrire en anglais, ou je dois donner mon opinion (avec des suggestions) sur la traversée des Etats Unis à pieds. J'ai fait mon texte, et je souhaite qu'on me le corrige, ou me l'améliore, je vous remercie pour votre aide ...I think, it must be difficult to resist the difference of temperature. I havre the impression there are no place to sleep over. It seems it must be shortage of food. In my mind, this is hard to climb a mountains. I feel we can be attacks by wild animals.
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In my opinion, it is not an easy thing. Your body has to adjust to climate change because the weather in the East Coast is different from the West Coast. It can be uncomfortable because you can sleep properly. Moreover, you do not have a lot of food with you. So you can feel hungry and thirsty too. Climbing mountains is difficult and can cause deadly accidents or broken bones. Your feet are sore and painful because you walk too much. You have blisters and it makes the trip so uncomfortable that you want to give up. During the night, you can be bitten by mosquitos or be attacked by wild animals like coyottes, beavers...
I think you need to be athletic to do so. This demands a lot of physical efforts. You must be trained and be full of energy. This is a very interesting challenge for people who like adventure. I am not an adventurer. So I would not do this.
In my opinion, it is not an easy thing. Your body has to adjust to climate change because the weather in the East Coast is different from the West Coast. It can be uncomfortable because you can sleep properly. Moreover, you do not have a lot of food with you. So you can feel hungry and thirsty too. Climbing mountains is difficult and can cause deadly accidents or broken bones. Your feet are sore and painful because you walk too much. You have blisters and it makes the trip so uncomfortable that you want to give up. During the night, you can be bitten by mosquitos or be attacked by wild animals like coyottes, beavers...
I think you need to be athletic to do so. This demands a lot of physical efforts. You must be trained and be full of energy. This is a very interesting challenge for people who like adventure. I am not an adventurer. So I would not do this.
Attention au mot place:je dirai there is no room qui ici ne signifie pas chambre mais place et c'est ainsi qu'on traduit en anglais
Il is hard to climb up a mountain. Food must be scarce.
Il is hard to climb up a mountain. Food must be scarce.
It can be uncomfortable because you cannot sleep properly.
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"to resist the difference of temperature"
=> ça me fait bizarre, je dirais :
'to resist at the variation of temperature'
"there are no place" => 'there is no place'
"to sleep over" => over, je ne comprend pas bien le sens, je dirais 'to sleep well' pour bien dormir.
"to climb a mountains" => 'to climb mountains'
"attacks" => 'attack'
Bon courage !