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Voilà, tout est dans le titre. J'ai un devoir (noté) dans lequel je dois me présenter ainsi que mes hobbies, ce que j'aime, n'aime pas etc..., je suis plutôt bonne en anglais mais la prof est très sévère donc j'aimerais vos aides et je vous en serais très reconnaissante =)
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First, my name is Solène but my friend called me So. I was born on the 16th april 1996 in Mulhouse. I live in the small town near Colmar: Mulhouse. My mother don't work so she is housewhife, my father is doctor. I have got 1 sister and 1 brother, my sister is very hardworking however my brother and me we are very lazy. At school my favourite subject is History because i have good marks and History impressive. I don't know yet what I'd like to do later but I'd rather practise the doctor before my father. Then I hate sport because i'm lazy i prefer watching Tv or playing on the computer because I'm geek on computer, I'm fond of chating in the topic with my virtuel friends. Also, I have never been to England but I want so much so later I would going however i went in Turkey, Germany, Danemark to my mind the most beautifull countrie in Turkey, Germany, Danemark was Turkey it's was stuning and it's was unforgetable travel.
Je peux dire quoi d'autre ? Si vous avez des idées n'hésitez pas, et si j'ai des fautes SVP corrigez les moi... Merci beaucoup à tous ceux qui ont pris la peine de lire <3<3<3 bisous ;)
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I'd rather practise the doctor before my father: je voulais dire Je fairais plutôt docteur peut-être comme mon père.
I'm fond of chatting : je voulais dire dans les discussions/forum
;)
I like chatting with my friends about everything.
Tu peux dire si tu as des animaux, si tu aimes lire et quels livres tu as lus ?
I'd like to be a doctor, like my father
I enjoy / like / love chatting with my friends on the internet.
My favourite book is benjamin button
I had read Benjamin Button by (je sais plus le nom de l'auteur;) ) it's was faboulous to my mind is the best book in the world because it's not long and easy for reading also it's an fantastique book it's my favourite subject (le genre du livre et son sujet)
c'est juste ? si vous pouvez me corriger si vous n'êtes pas occupé ,si vous avez le temps bien sûre .
First of all, I'm Solène. But my friends call me So. I was born on the 16th april 1996, in Mulhouse. I'm living in a small town near Colmar wich is called Mulhouse. My mother is a housewife, and my father is a doctor. I've got one brother, and one sister who's very hardworking as against my brother and me. I'm rather like my brother, so lazy. At school my favorite subject is history.In this subject, I am very passionate and attentive to, what brings me good marks ! I'm not sure of my future cursus, but i would like make medecine's study, like my father. You have to know that i hate Sports, like i told you im very lazy, so i prefer watch tv, or talk with my virtual friends on chats. I'm found of my computer.
Although i'e neer been to England, i've travelled a lot. I went to Turkey, Germany, Danemark. My favourite trip was Turkey. I loved this travel, it was an unforgetable trip, i would never forget.
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Je propose quelques corrections pour cette présentation en anglais :
I live in a small town near Colmar
My mother doesn't work / doesn't have a job / is jobless
housewife
my father is a doctor
one brother and one sister
my sister is very hardworking whereas my brother and I are very lazy
At school, (...)
I have good marks
History impressive : problème de sens que voulez vous dire exactement ?
I'd rather practise the doctor before my father : problème de sens, que voulez vous dire ?
Then I hate sport : Etrange utilisation du then, autant ne pas le mettre.
Because I am lazy and I prefer (...) because I'm a (true)/ (real) geek
I'm fond of chatting (problème de sens : "in the topic" que voulez vous dire?)
virtual
Also, I have never been to England but I want so much so later
I would going however i went in Turkey, Germany, Danemark to my mind the most beautifull countrie in Turkey, Germany, Danemark was Turkey it's was stuning and it's was unforgetable travel.
Refaites ce passage en plusieurs phrases, il est trop confus
Although I've never been to England I'd love to go there when I'm older.
I've already been to Turkey, Germany and Denmark (ce n'est pas daté donc vous mettrez le present perfect)
Turkey is the most beautiful country I have ever seen. It was a stunning and unforgetable trip / journey.
C'est dèjà pas mal tout ça.