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Bonjour, je lundi dernier une assistante anglaise est venue dans ma classe d'anglais Euro. La prof nous a donc demander de prendre dec notes sur elle. le devoir est donc de: Rédiger à partir de vos notes un texte qui décris l'intervenante. Ce texte fera au moins 200 mots et vous le présenterai a l'oral.
Je pense avoir fini mais jai peur qu'il y ai des fautes et/ou des défauts de formulations.
vous trouverez ci-dessous ce que j'ai fais. En espérant vous avoir assez aiguiller merci par avance pour tout aide merci
Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
She name is Tia and her family name is Sharp. She is 23 years old. She come from of the United States of America, in North of America in Montana, his situated at the north of Montana. The capital of the United States is Washington D.C. Washington is situated on coastline east of the United States.
She was born in Nevada on Carson City. She has got 1 sister. Her name is Terra and she is 20 years old. she has got bland long hair and the blue eyes. She is slim and not tall.
She is an English assistant. She studied at the university of Montana.
She has got 2 dogs. Their name is Paz and Cruz. Their names are Spanish but they didn’t Spanish origin. Her nanny lives in Italy.
She likes reggae, rap and alternative. She likes soccer and more particular the woman’s Nation team of the United states.
Her series prefer is modern family, Vampire Diaries, Pretty Little Liars and How I met your mother. She likes the Thai food.
Them prefer region in the United states is state of Washington.
She came from one week ago and until in June. It’s the first trip in France.
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Je ne suis pas assez forte en anglais, mais je peux déjà te signaler quelques erreurs:
It’s the ( son) first trip in France.
She ( son) name is Tia
his situated at the north of Montana.
Her name is Terra ( ou Tia?)
Them prefer region in the United
merci pour votre reponse
Terra c'est sa soeur
merci beaucoup pour votre aide
Salut, nous ne sommes pas sensé donné de réponses complètes ici, je me permet une donc seulement correction partielle, cependant :
- Je ne corrigerai pas toutes les fautes, certaines seront en gras et italique (et j'indiquerai une aide entre parenthèse
- compare ma correction avec celle de quelqu'un d'autre pour être sûr
She (regarde un peu plus loin) name is Tia and her family name is Sharp. She is 23 years old. She come from of the (on ne met pas d'article devant un nom propre) United States of America, in North of America in Montana, his situated at the north of Montana. The capital of the United States is Washington D.C. Washington is situated on coastline east of the United States.
She was born in Nevada on Carson City. She has got 1 sister. (pourquoi au passé ? Elle est morte ??) Her name is Terra and she is 20 years old (apparemment non elle n'est pas morte, donc la première phrase est au présent). she has got bland long hair and the (inutile) blue eyes. She is slim and not tall. (d'accord, on a une description de la sœur car elle en a parlé oralement, mais si on veut être logique, il faudrait aussi décrire la principale intéressée)
She is an English assistant. She studied at the university of Montana.
She has got 2 dogs (toujours la même remarque, pourquoi au passé ?). Their name is Paz and Cruz. Their names are Spanish but they didn’t Spanish origin (si l'on traduit ça fait "Ils ne font pas d'origines espagnol"). Her nanny lives in Italy (est-ce vraiment important ?).
She likes reggae, rap and alternative. She likes soccer and more particular the woman’s Nation team of the (pas d'article, juste of) United states.
Her series prefered (je suis gentil, je l'ajoute directement) is (is c'est pour le singulier, or il y a plusieurs séries) modern family, Vampire Diaries, Pretty Little Liars and How I met your mother. She likes the Thai food.
Them prefered region
She came from one week ago and until in June (la formulation correcte est "She came one week ago and come back in USA in next june"). It’s the (son premier voyage, pas LE premier voyage) first trip in France.
Salut.
T'as mis "résolu" mais y'a encore beaucoup de fautes non corrigées par ceux qui t'ont aidé.
Exemple: She come from (tout au début) ... she comeS from
Si tu veux plus d'aide, dis le.
Ils ont besoin d'aide !
- Aucun devoir trouvé, poste ton devoir maintenant.
Je te mets en gras là ou j'ai remarquer des erreurs (grammaticale ou formulation). Je te laisse le plaisir de les corrigée toi-même
She name is Tia and her family name is Sharp. She is 23 years old. She come from of the United States of America, in North of America in Montana, his situated at the north of Montana. The capital of the United States is Washington D.C. Washington is situated on coastline east of the United States.
She was born in Nevada on Carson City. She has got 1 sister. Her name is Terra and she is 20 years old. she has got bland long hair and the blue eyes. She is slim and not tall.
She is an English assistant. She studied at the university of Montana.
She has got 2 dogs. Their name is Paz and Cruz. Their names are Spanish but they didn’t Spanish origin. Her nanny lives in Italy.
She likes reggae, rap and alternative. She likes soccer and more particular the woman’s Nation team of the United states.
Her series prefer is modern family, Vampire Diaries, Pretty Little Liars and How I met your mother. She likes the Thai food.
Them prefer region in the United states is state of Washington.
She came from one week ago and until in June. It’s the first trip in France.
merci beaucoup, j'ai compris mes fautes merci beaucoup.