Passage à l'oral en Anglais, vraiment urgent !!!

Sujet du devoir

" You try to convince your teacher to go on a trip to the UK to discover the country's national symbols. You will choose one, and justify your choice in front of the class, who will react to what you say"

J'ai rédigé le sujet en Anglais et j'aimerais que vous me corrigiez mes fautes de grammaire, conjugaison, syntaxe...

Merci d'Avance, pour votre aide, je passe demain à l'oral !!

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Everybody knows Sherlock Holmes, of course,(tout le monde connaît Sherlock Holmes, bien sûr,) he is first a fictionnal detective created by Scottish author and physician Sir Arthur Conan Doyle but also the most famous detective in the world, with his elaborate pipe and eccentric hobbies he is a special symbol for the English people because he represents the archetypal English character : calm, rationnal, a little arrogant. Before I forget last year the movie "Sherlock Holmes" went out to the cinema.
Holme's offices at 221 Baker Street in the heart of london, remain a place of pilgrimage for Holmes fans from all over the world.

In conclusion, I think this trip to the U.K is a good opportunity to discover more things about this famous detective, by visiting the Sherlock Holmes Museum.