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Bonjour Kisa178,

J'ai vecu en Australie pendant 8 ans, donc je sais un peu d'informations :-)

Tu as bon, il n'y a plus grand choses à mettre dans ton texte, tu as PRESQUE tout mis, mais, il y a quelques fautes, très peu:

"The capital of Australia is Canberra, and the population is of roughly 20 million inhabitants.
Australia measures 7 682 300 square kilometers.
The climate is tropical in the North and is temperate in the South.
At the beginning, the economy of development was slow and based on the export of wool.
Many tourists visit koalas, kangaroos, wallabies, Tasmanian tigers, kookaburras and much more in Nature Reserves.
Australia has many tourist attractions such as The Sydney Opera House, The Sydney Harbour bridge, Uluru and the Great Barrier Reef."

Voila,

Cordialement,

Benjamin CNED 3ème

Merci chickenmanben95,

Mais je ne suis pas sur de roughly et measures!!!

Roughly = Environ/à peut près
Measures = Mesures =)

Attention tu as oublié de mettre le "per"
Australia is 7682300 per square kilometers .

Je vais te proposer autre chose:

In the world, Australia is located in the indian ocean, the southern hemisphere. The surface of this country is 7686850 square kilometers with 22 inhabitant. Australia is composed of six states: Western Australia, Northeen, South Australia, Queensland, New South Wales, Victoria and two territories. The capital of Australia is Canberra. The cities are located on the coast as Perth, Darwin, Brisban, Sydney, Melbourne or Adelade. The middle of the country is a desert and between the coast and the desert, there is a zone called the bush. The head of the state of Australia is Queen Elisabeth II and the head of the government is Julia Guillard, a Prime Minister. Australia is a constitutional monarchy. In this country we can see dingoes, kangarooes, koalas, emus... Australia is touristic. For instance, in Sydney there are world famous places of interest, we can relaxing in parks, walk over The Darling Harbour, The Opera House for festivals and concerts, cultural activities and visit museum. It's James Cook who discovered Australia in 1770.

Tu peut aussi ajouter le climat et parler des Aborigaines (en anglais Aborigines) qui étaient les 1er habitants, décrire le drapeau de l'Australie, et après je pense que ce sera pas mal =)

Merci Mickael0205,mais ma prof d'anglais ma demandée de faire un petit résumée sur l'Australie!!

A ok désolé =)))

Non ne sois pas désolée ton texte est trés bien mais je me demandais si tu pouvais raccourcir un peu!!!En tout cas merci quand même!!

bonjour,

Quand tu parles de Sydney tu peux mettre aussi :

Sydney is a touristic city with the well-know attractions like the famous Opera house, the Royal Botanic gardens and galleries dans museums.This town offers too a outdoor life with the places like the national parks, restaurants, square to walk. Sydney has 37 beaches with several activites of waterports : surf, sailing...It's ideal to swim. Sydney is a busting city.
Ce que tu as fait n'est pas mal du tout peaufine un peu plus et cela sera super.
BON COURAGE

MERCI BEAUCOUP FLOWER93!!!

excuse pour les fautes de frappe je vais tellement vite que j'avale les lettres. Il est évident qu'il faut lire in the museums,several activities,

Merci!!!!

tu px ossi mettre sa je crois ke sa pourra être utile

history
austalia became a british colony in 1788 when the famous navigator james cook set foot on this island after a long trip of 8 month
the british used australia to get rid of their convicts because in britain ,the jails were overcrowded

dsl j ai fais des fautes australia months

Merci natou973