salut,il faut que je raconte ce que j'ai fais à noël (rédaction)

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laconne
Publié le 15 janv. 2012 il y a 2A Fin › 22 janv. 2012 2A
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SUJET DU DEVOIR

Je dois raconter ce que j'ai fais à noël au passé bien sûre mais je suis vraiment nulle en anglais et donc je n'arrives pas aidez moi je vous en supplie

OÙ J'EN SUIS DANS MON DEVOIR

J'ai rien fais ,en faite j'ai tout taper sur google traduction donc ça me sort des choses h-s ;( JE VOUS EN SUPPLIE AIDEZ moi c'est ma dernière chance de remonter ma moyenne ,c'est le dernier contrôle du trimestre et pour l'instant j'ai 4 de moyenne =(

6 commentaires pour le devoir salut,il faut que je raconte ce que j'ai fais à noël (rédaction)

Chaaa971
Chaaa971
2A
Bah déjà qu'est ce que tu as fais à noël et ensuite utilise un dictionnaire et fais des phrases simples au passé ( ed ou les verbes irréguliers à la fin des livres)

Chaaa971
Chaaa971
2A

vaness25
vaness25
2A
This christmas was the same as every year.First I waked up at 11 o clok and packed my gifts. Then i went to my grand parents home with the rest of my family to celebrate christmas there. Then we arrived it was 13 o clock so we starts to eat. The afternoon I went to the cinéma with my cousins , after that we walked in the park with my dog, it was very funy. Then we came back home and celebrate christmas until midnight. To conclude i would say that i had a good time. And i have also get gifts !!

vaness25
vaness25
2A
Il y a quelque fautes mais bon je dirais que c'est pas mal !
je traduis :
Ce noel était comme les autres. je me suis levé a 11 heures et jai emballé mes cadeaux. puis je suis allé chez mes grands parents avec le reste de ma famille quand nous sommes arrivés il était 13 heures donc nous avons commencer par manger. l'apres midi je suis allé au cinéma avec mes cousins, puis on est allé au park avec mon chien, c'etais tres fun ! De retour chez mes grands parents on a célébrer noel jusqu'a minuit. pour conclure, je dirais que jai passé un bon moment. Et j'ai aussi ressus des cadeaux!!

miren75
miren75
2A
Si on ne sait pas ce que tu as fait comment t'aider ?

On christmas eve, my grand parents came to visit us. We had dinner together. My cousins were also with them. We had fun. We played board games, video games. The dinner was fantastic. We had goose lever, sea food, roasted turkey with chestnuts and mashed potatoes, then a christmas cake. We all laughed and enjoyed the evening. At midnight we opened our presents. I was so happy because my parents offered me a great present! We sang a few songs and around 2. am I was so tired that I fell asleep on the couch. I finally went to bed an hour later. My cousins stayed home because it was too late to drive.
I will not forget that Christmas. I was able to see my cousins who live very far from us. So Christmas is a good opportunity for me to reconnect with my family.


dedygh
dedygh
2A
This christmas was the same as every year. I woke up at 11 o'clock and packed my gifts. When I was done we went to my grand parents house with the rest of my family to celebrate christmas. By the time we arrived it was already time to eat. When I was full I went with my cousins to the movies, after that I walked with my dog to the park, it was loads of fun. I went back to my family and we started to celebrate christmas until midnight.I received gifts. In conclusion I would say that I had a great time.



ILS ONT BESOIN D'AIDE !

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