SVP, ma lettre de correspondance est fini. Juste quelque correction

Publié le 2 janv. 2013 il y a 11A par Anonyme - Fin › 7 janv. 2013 dans 11A
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Sujet du devoir

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Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Dear Henriette,


I do not celebrate Christmas because I am Muslim.
I always dreamed to have a pet, but I still have no agreement of my parents ..
I would really like to be fluent in English. 
When I look at movies subtitles in French, I want that a thing it is to live in England! 
During the holidays, I'm going to Switzerland in Zurich. I think the flight was 1:30! When I arrived with my family we are staying at my uncle's house. He was our guide and he showed us the best places in Switzerland. We are going skiing then we rent a cottage.
It was really beautiful, my father and I are going to get wood for the alumer walk.
My father taught me how to make a fire, we are staying the whole evening had to wait until 2013. It was meirveilleux.


Thank you very much for your mail.
We will soon take over the school!
Wish me luck.
take care
Montaha your friend.



8 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 2 janv. 2013
"it was meirveilleux" merveilleux se dit marvellous en anglais, sinon je ne vois pas d'autres faites dans ta lettre!
Anonyme
Posté le 2 janv. 2013
Dear Henriette,
Many thanks for your mail. It's always great to hear back from you. Glad to hear you had an amazing Christmas celebration with your family.
As you can guess, we do not celebrate Christmas because we are muslims.
But, anyway, my parents drew me to Switzerland during the Christmas holiday. We went to Zurich at my uncle's.
My uncle and my parents hired a chalet near a thermal bath in Les Bains de Lavey.
That really was a wonderful holiday because when we got inside of the thermal bath, the temperature was really warm whereas outside there was a siberian cold. I swam in a swimming pool with warm water and then I went in several saunas. I enjoyed playing with my brothers and nephews in water.
We stayed at Les Bains de Lavey during 2 days.
We went back to Zurich and stayed 3 days more at my uncle's.
We visited the city all together. We went to eat the famous swiss fondue and it was delicious.
Now we are already back and I cannot forget these lovely days we spent in Switzerland.
I am looking forwar to going back there right now :)
Take care
Your friend Montaha
Anonyme
Posté le 2 janv. 2013
looking forward
Anonyme
Posté le 4 janv. 2013
Merci enormement, tu m’épate avec ton anglais!
Anonyme
Posté le 4 janv. 2013
Merci enormement, tu m’épate avec ton anglais!
Anonyme
Posté le 4 janv. 2013
Merci enormement, tu m’épate avec ton anglais!
Anonyme
Posté le 4 janv. 2013
Merci enormement, tu m’épate avec ton anglais!
Anonyme
Posté le 4 janv. 2013
Merci à toi aussi et peut-être à une autre fois.
J'adore l'Anglais!
Bonne année

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