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YOU ARE ENTERING A CASTING FIR A TV PROGRAMME OF YOUR CHOICE. INTRODUCE YOURSELF,EXPLAIN WHO YOU ARE, YOUR LIKES AND DISLIKES, AND WHY YOU WANT TO TAKE PART IN THE PROGRAMME.LES ETAPES A SUIVRE :
_ Choisissez une émission a laquelle vous souhaitez participer (J'ai choisi SECRET STORY)
_ Vous devez inclure les points suivants : key information about yourself ; skills you can rely on ; qualities that can be used for the programme you are entering ; hobbies ; musical tastes ; books you like ; and goals you can achieve.
Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
My name is Melanie Allouche but you can call me Mel, and I have almost 15 yearsI would like to participate in Secret story because I think be made for this game, indeed, I am playful, manipulative, very good liar,and a big mouth to remain polite I say out loud what other people think a low voice, and above all I have a very strong character. I don't care what others think of me. I'm keen on arguing and create stories, people are so naive that it is very simple.
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Though, I'm helpful, generous, and kind but only with friends who I like, so not with everybody and I like to tease them, I think it's funny
I(m the ideal candidate for this TV programme because I love the competition and my goal is to win this programme because I've got some projects. Actually, I have to win the jackpot. That will enable me to open my office because I dream of becoming a doctor someday.
I(m the ideal candidate for this TV programme because I love the competition and my goal is to win this programme because I've got some projects. Actually, I have to win the jackpot. That will enable me to open my office because I dream of becoming a doctor someday.
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In spite of that, I like to help people, I'm generous, but only with friends I like. I(m the ideal candidate for this TV programme because I love competition and I really want to win, I will, since I'm the best.
I'm persistent but not stubborn. -> je t'ai rajouté cette phrase, "je suis tenace mais pas butée".
A ta place, je ne parlerai pas de la raison pour laquelle tu veux gagner, je veux dire dans ce genre de jeu, tu peux dire que tu aimes l'argent aller mais dire que tu veux devenir docteur, c'est tout à ton honneur mais dans ce type de programme TV cela fait trop sérieux.
In spite of that, I like to help people, I'm generous, but only with friends I like. I(m the ideal candidate for this TV programme because I love competition and I really want to win, I will, since I'm the best.
I'm persistent but not stubborn. -> je t'ai rajouté cette phrase, "je suis tenace mais pas butée".
A ta place, je ne parlerai pas de la raison pour laquelle tu veux gagner, je veux dire dans ce genre de jeu, tu peux dire que tu aimes l'argent aller mais dire que tu veux devenir docteur, c'est tout à ton honneur mais dans ce type de programme TV cela fait trop sérieux.
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c'est to participate in et pas to
http://forum.wordreference.com/showthread.php?t=1122748&langid=6
Fort caractère : to have a strong temper
think of themselves
c'est to participate in et pas to
http://forum.wordreference.com/showthread.php?t=1122748&langid=6
Fort caractère : to have a strong temper
think of themselves
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In spit of that, I'm helpful, generous, and kind but only with friends who I like, so it's not with everybody and I enjoy annoying them, it's funny
I(m the ideal candidate for this TV programme because I love the competition and my goal is to win this programme because I've got projects. Actually, I must to win the game's money which is to open my office because I dream of becoming a doctor.