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Je dois écrire une lettre à une famille d'accueil, et j'aimerai que vous me corrigiez ce que j'ai déjà fait.Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
A)IdéesI)Remerciments à la famille.
I'm grateful for your family's identity card, you look a nice famiy. It's really kind of you to host me.
II)Présentation personelle.
Now I'm going to introduce my self. My name's ---- and I'm 15 years old. I have one sister, she is ---- ans she is -- years old. My parents are called ---- and ----, they are -- and -- yeards old. I have good relation ship with them. I live in a big house, with a garden where my mother grows vegetables.Wehave a caravan too. I go to ----------- high school, it's located in -------. I spend hours to playing the guitar with friends, and I really enjoy to riding a bike.
III)Interêt pour la ville (Sydney)
I have chosen Sydney because I think it's a city to see. When I was young, I wanted to see kangaroos and today it's an oppertunity.
IV)Questions sur la famille
How often do you go to the beach ?
V)Intérêt de ce type de séjour
I think That travelling is the thing to improve my English. I'm so longing to meet you and to live with your family because for me it's important to see a new way of life, a new culture and to discover a new city.
B)Début & fin de la lettre
October 14th, 2011
Dear Mrs and Mr Jacksons
I can't way to go to Sydney
Yours sincerely.
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ah non y'a aussi : "I have chosen Sydney because I think it's a city to see" ca sent google traduction et c'est franchement faux. because i think it's a very beautiful city. La c'est mieux.
"IV)Questions sur la famille
How often do you go to the beach ?
" C'est tout ce que tu as trouvé ?,?
"I think That travelling is the thing to improve my English. I'm so longing to meet you and to live with your family because for me it's important to see a new way of life, a new culture and to discover a new city.
" La je sas pas trop mais je pense que c'est faux. JE PENSE !
Tres cordialement
"IV)Questions sur la famille
How often do you go to the beach ?
" C'est tout ce que tu as trouvé ?,?
"I think That travelling is the thing to improve my English. I'm so longing to meet you and to live with your family because for me it's important to see a new way of life, a new culture and to discover a new city.
" La je sas pas trop mais je pense que c'est faux. JE PENSE !
Tres cordialement
I spend hours playing...
I really enjoy riding my bike
I am looking forward to meeting you and living ...
I really enjoy riding my bike
I am looking forward to meeting you and living ...
Bonsoir,
J'ai corrigé tes erreurs. Voici ton texte. Si tu le souhaite tu peux le compléter et je te corrigerai ce que tu auras ajouté.
Bon courage !
J'ai corrigé tes erreurs. Voici ton texte. Si tu le souhaite tu peux le compléter et je te corrigerai ce que tu auras ajouté.
Bon courage !
Désolée j'ai oublié de copié le texte !
A)Idées
I)Remerciments à la famille.
I'm grateful for your family's identity card, you look a nice famiy. It is really kind of you to host me.
II)Présentation personelle.
Now I am going to introduce myself. My name is ---- and I am 15 years old. I have one sister, she is ---- ans she is -- years old. My parents are called ---- and ----, they are -- and -- yeards old. I get on well with them. I live in a big house, with a garden where my mother grows vegetables.We have a trailer too. I go to ----------- high school, in -------. I spend hours playing the guitar with friends, and I am keen on riding my bike.
III)Interêt pour la ville (Sydney)
I chose Sydney because I think it is a city worth discovering. When I was young, I wanted to see kangaroos and today this dream is about to come true (ce rêve est sur le point de se réaliser).
IV)Questions sur la famille
How often do you go to the beach ?
V)Intérêt de ce type de séjour
I think that travelling can help me very much to improve my English. I am looking forward to meeting you (je suis très impatiente) and to living with your family because it's important for me to discover a new way of life, a new culture and a new city.
B)Début & fin de la lettre
October 14th, 2011
Dear Mrs and Mr Jacksons
I can't wait to go to Sydney
Yours sincerely.
A)Idées
I)Remerciments à la famille.
I'm grateful for your family's identity card, you look a nice famiy. It is really kind of you to host me.
II)Présentation personelle.
Now I am going to introduce myself. My name is ---- and I am 15 years old. I have one sister, she is ---- ans she is -- years old. My parents are called ---- and ----, they are -- and -- yeards old. I get on well with them. I live in a big house, with a garden where my mother grows vegetables.We have a trailer too. I go to ----------- high school, in -------. I spend hours playing the guitar with friends, and I am keen on riding my bike.
III)Interêt pour la ville (Sydney)
I chose Sydney because I think it is a city worth discovering. When I was young, I wanted to see kangaroos and today this dream is about to come true (ce rêve est sur le point de se réaliser).
IV)Questions sur la famille
How often do you go to the beach ?
V)Intérêt de ce type de séjour
I think that travelling can help me very much to improve my English. I am looking forward to meeting you (je suis très impatiente) and to living with your family because it's important for me to discover a new way of life, a new culture and a new city.
B)Début & fin de la lettre
October 14th, 2011
Dear Mrs and Mr Jacksons
I can't wait to go to Sydney
Yours sincerely.
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C'est globalement assez bien mais je vois que tu es en 2nd alors que là, c'est la partie college. Sinon : "she is ---- ans she is -- years old" ??? y'a un problme là. "Wehave a caravan too" tu enleves le too et ce sera bon.