faire la correction les expérience scientifique chez mr Hyde et Jekyll!

Sujet du devoir

voila j'aimerai que vous me corrigiez mes fautes de grammaire orthographe conjugaison dans le texte que j'ai écris et si vous pouviez donner votre avis et me mettre une note sur 20 ça serai trés gentil, merci d'avance.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

In the Victorian era, Charles Darwin published, on 1859 the first book about Origins of Species. Robert Louis Stevenson was inspired about that because, in the story Dr.Jekyll drinks a potion and his body becomes more small, twist and ugly, he looks like the first human on the earth. In this era, everybody or almost everybody thought the science was witchcraft. It was crazy to say, in a book, you can change your body when you drunk a potion. In the story, Dr.jekyll do a potion but his science defies the laws of nature, it’s nearly ridiculous. Robert Louis Stevenson is against the science, he thought, it was witchcraft and he tries to prove by his book the science leads to death.